please do continue if it is possible

good fic hope ya continue it

Why are many authors so insistent on their nonsensical chapter labeling? The first chapter is the first chapter and you named the first chapter as prologue. Therefore this chapter should be chapter 2!

An awesome story so far. If it would help you with editing the story and catching the extra capitalized words, may I suggest using . If you use Chrome the basic version is free. Looking forward to the rest of this work.

Great story so far

This is great. I hope you continue this in the near future.

Excellent

Just found this story and I have to say that this story is excellent so far. I like the story line and look forward to your next update! Please keep up the good work!

Does he pick up the chest, or just shrink it and leave it there. I figured the chest was merely an entrance disguised as a chest, with a portal leading to that deep tunnel.

The only problem with the pairing is that Serana is a Vampire a immortal one, and Harry is a mortal male.

So he find that he is potentialy immortal so he try to kill himself right away ? I call bullshit

Hmm. I only believe in 8 divines. Akatosh, Mara, Kynareth, Talos, Julianos, Zenithar, Arkay and Stendarr.

oh dear god more. it's so good. maybe let Harry keep the chest with him.

In terms of the word *descent*, the action and the word in almost all tenses is the same. In your case, you have used the term *descention* which is a misspelling of the word *dissension* which is the present tense of multiple cases of *dissent* or arguments against something.

Other than that - a brilliant story. Keep it up!

Well this is certainly interesting, I hope you will continue soon.