Awww!. That was so Gooood!
But its a shame its overI really liked the story.
I dont know if I wanna read an Umi's perspective but... i think i will give it a try.
Nice Work.
And see you next time.

Great chapter!
It's good to know that you've returned :D
What did Umi do with Eli? This does not look good...
I do not know what will come in next chapters. Hopefully not many problems.
Thanks for the chapter, I can't wait the next! n.n

Oh, it was Umi's mom xD hahaha nah i dont know, really good chapter tho.
Im glad you are back ;3

it would be interesting to hear Umi's thoughts about Kotori. It is also good to see you back author san hopefully I can read more of your KotoUmi works in the future

Wow, really nice story :3.
And as i always say, as long as you dont abandon the story is ok.
Tha match was really good too. You manage to describe very good the situation. Just a little doubt, i dont know how those a Bow string works, but i think the hit wasnt suppose to be so bad as you describe.
But anyway, good chapter.
Keep up the good work.

Hold on...

I swear I WANT to say that this person that Honoka is meeting in MAKI, but Maki is taller than Honoka though that is still a huge possibility. Hell, she may as well be dating anyone from LL as well so the main pairing is KotoUmi but it could be HonoAnyone at this point or even HonoHarem.

Honoka you sly girl. Keep it up. :3c

si , has la perspectiva de umi

I loved the chapter. I like how you make Umi look as cool in front of Kotori.
Si fuera posible, me gustaría ver a Kotori interactuando con una Umi tímida y sonrojada.
I would like to see Umi's perspective :D
Good work, I really, really like your history.
I wait for the next chapter. Bye n.n

I do not understand how this fic has few reviews if it is so good.
Please tell me it's not the end. I need more.
Thanks for the good work n.n
Google translate xs

Is it done or...?

I really like your story a lot.
I'll be waiting for the next chapter :)

I hate Honoka!
Next chapter please
Than you and Sayonnara!

enserio amo este fic, actualiza prnto

In less words, very good drama story.

And here we go again. For some reason... this not surprise me.
Well, you didnt explain what exactly they were doing (Honoka and the other "mysterious" girl) but... well i wont jump to conclusions, lets see what happen next.
Now, in other hand, WOW the scene of Umi and Kotori in the bedroom, you really caught me off guard, i would never expected that Umi would express how she feels. At least not that fast. Very nice chapter.
Keep up the good work.