That would be something Josh would do.

This was an amazing idea, and an amazing story that came from it! I love this!

I love this

I enjoyed reading this.

You did a good job illustrating how boring it was for Shiki to wait for customers without dragging it out so long that it bore me. It makes me happy that Neku and Shiki are helping out some players. That was nice of Joshua to assign the mission to be making Seamless one of the top brands.

Good job.

That's pretty interesting fanfiction. Very pleasant to read. I also hate to be that person, but there's a mistake in Joshua's message. It's supposed to be "you're" not "your". "Your" is a possessive pronoun, when "you're" stands for "you are". Sorry for pointing that out and I know a lot people use it, but I think Joshua would be the last person to use incorrect grammar. Apart from that, everything seems just fine. I really enjoyed reading it ;)