Reviews for Trying to 'Tap' into Love |
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avidreader chapter 1 . 6/2 So cute. I hate those reporters. Sonamy forever. |
AAphrodite chapter 1 . 5/29/2019 AWW! THIS IS SO CUTE! I LOVE IT SO MUCH! |
Guest chapter 1 . 1/10/2019 OMG. THIS WAS AMAZING TwT |
Cyo the Lion chapter 1 . 12/26/2018 Sonic is so kind. |
hufflepuffxlulux chapter 1 . 12/15/2018 Ugh yes ! I live for these emotional stories. I loved it, the way you described the feelings was so clean and really did get to me at times! |
Kimmypuff123 chapter 1 . 12/14/2018 this was beautiful |
Pinandneedles chapter 1 . 6/26/2018 this is such a cute story. i hope there could be a part 2 . keep up the good work! |
SunshineGirl99 chapter 1 . 3/13/2018 Cute! Loved it! |
Byrd3-13 chapter 1 . 10/23/2017 Really good writing |
SilverDawn2010 chapter 1 . 9/12/2017 This is a very cute and heartwarming story. I enjoyed reading it! Your detail and level of description is just enough. I like how you write emotions! My favorite types of stories are ones where the thought process of the characters is gone into depth, and I love that you did that here. I could really follow what they were thinking and saying. Just a few things: I noticed a mistake here and there, so try to do a bit more proofreading. Your style of putting each sentence in a different line makes the story a bit hard on the eyes to read, as I have to keep skipping from line to line. Some more paragraph groupings would be nice. Also, Sonic and Amy seemed a bit out of character, but not terribly so. Nothing big stood out to me, I'd just recommend you do a bit more character study. It's a cute little story! Nice job! 3 ~SilverDawn~ |
Junior BLD chapter 1 . 6/5/2017 This was another sweet story! I liked it! |
Cutsie Pie chapter 1 . 5/4/2017 This is to good for words... So I'll use emojies! |
AmegakureAngel chapter 1 . 2/5/2017 Love this oneshot! I really enjoyed Sonic's struggle at the end, it was very sweet and interesting. |
wavyinterlude chapter 1 . 9/15/2016 That was some ending! I love the detail! |
Honey chapter 1 . 9/10/2016 Wow , what a good story |