Reviews for Shadow of Steel
Guest chapter 21 . 2/27/2019
You could've named this 'Danse and Valentine Relationship Advice' you know. Those too are hilarious
Jordan Robinson chapter 1 . 7/29/2018
Ad Victoriam Paladin!
BelieverofManyThings chapter 32 . 4/26/2018
Fantastic chapter :D
Paladin Bailey chapter 32 . 4/25/2018
Welcome back!
Glad to see you are still writing this even after being away for 8 months.
Definitely still enjoying your fanfict.
Ad Victoriam!
Guest chapter 31 . 8/27/2017
Omg I want more! This story is my favorite, really good quality of writting :)
scythetrill chapter 30 . 7/20/2017
I love your story, please continue your amazing work! I'm waiting impatiently for the next chapter! :)
whoandbikes chapter 15 . 7/15/2017
I never thought I would like a story that had a romance with ss and Elder Maxon. I'm not going to lie and say this is the first story I have read with the two of them hooking up but it is the first one that's really a romance and best one I have come across so far. Keep up the great work.
The romance is brewing just right so if others don't like it, I say that's toooo bad.
sorry to disappoint you, but the wiki did show that Danses full name is Saul Johnfield Danse it was edited out of the wiki but i still have a screenshot of that information if your interested in seeing it for yourself? either way as you said its not a well known bit of info and it's your story you can tell it any way you like.
Thank you for a wonderful story so far and again please keep up the great work!
erdervv chapter 30 . 7/10/2017
Damn, i like how you used fallout 3 holotapes in this chapter, to be honest i even forgot those thing existed, seeing them here used to give some depth to an entirely new character to the story was surprising, it was a really nice touch.
erdervv chapter 27 . 2/20/2017
Oh boy, here comes dat Charon.
Inquisitor Dare chapter 15 . 12/16/2016
Actually, Paladin Danse's name is Saul Johnfield Danse as revealed by cut dialogue that some of the modding community recovered.
Paladin Bailey chapter 24 . 11/14/2016
Me personally I like the longer chapters, sure it may take a week to write and proof read but it's definitely worth it :D
Let's hope when the time comes the Brotherhood of Steel and Minutemen could form a NCR type of government or have the Minutemen absorbed into the Brotherhood of Steel as Military Police and Peacekeepers like how the Desert Rangers joined the NCR.
Since the Brotherhood of Steel calls the Capitol Wasteland it's "Country" which shows right there that the Brotherhood is focusing on rebuilding humanity, and hey at least Elder Maxon and Brooks are starting to tolerate Nick and Piper.
So maybe there's real hope for the Brotherhood of Steel, I mean people keep calling them "Fascists" and "Xenophobic" but that's how military government's are, hell I'd rather be in the Brotherhood of Steel then out in the wasteland being afraid of getting attacked by Raiders and Muties.
Ad Victoriam!
Paladin Bailey chapter 22 . 10/24/2016
Well done! Very good writing, it's like I'm actually reading a proper book.
Keep it up.
Now time to hunt down a Courser.
Ad Victoriam!
Paladin Bailey chapter 21 . 10/16/2016
Well damn that's one hell of a chapter, I think you hit the nail on the head with the speech, something that would've definitely gotten the Brotherhood of Steel and Minutemen to Co-exist.
Honestly though the Minutemen are basically just like the Desert Rangers and NCR combined the Minutemen with the help of the Brotherhood of Steel can definitely make a east coast variant of the NCR, you know for example the Brotherhood being Special Forces and Traning Instructors and Minutemen being Army/Air Force and Rangers. They could definitely rebuild the country not as a reborn America but something close to it at least until they make contact with the NCR once the NCR gets through the Midwest which would be 30 years maybe more depending on the dangers awaits them.
But uhm yeah I definitely see the Brotherhood of Steel and Minutemen Co-existing as the Canon ending for Fallout 4 since it leaves both groups with a common goal to thrive more and build a strong alliance that would secure the east coast for both factions.
Ad Victoriam!
erdervv chapter 20 . 10/16/2016
This fic keeps getting better, you did a great work thus far, i hope we'll see more interaction with different companions in the future to, i really want to see maxon (that you actually managed to portrait as a human being, oh boy!) interact with Nick or Preston "another settlements need our help" Garvey, now that i think of it, it would be nice seeing how the BoS and the minutemen interact.
Hrya chapter 20 . 10/11/2016
I wonder if there will be any Taylor-Manson babies in the future. Awesome story. Can't wait for more.
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