Reviews for Adventure of ASL Brothers
Guest chapter 6 . 5/6/2018
THIS IS INCREDIBLY CUTE AN WIIIIIILLLL ALWAYS LOVE IT!
Rboooks chapter 6 . 1/1/2018
This was so cute and it made my heart melt. It was adorable thay he was turn into a child and they still made him a cake. This was nice to read thank you
hi chapter 5 . 5/4/2017
Thanks for doing my other request! I loved it! :D

I have a couple more if that's okay. I'd like to see one where Kid!Ace gets sick and Luffy and Sabo take care of him and there's adorableness. I'd also like to see an AU where Adult!Ace gets turned into a kid (like three years old, maybe?) and OlderTeen/Adult!Luffy and Sabo take care of him, and Ace pulls a bunch of stuff on them (disappearing in crowds, crawling into bed with them, jumping on their stomachs to wake them up, climbing onto things ("How did he get up there?!" "AAAHHH, he's gonna fall!") wandering off because he saw a pretty flower and thought they might like it... etc. ) Either of these would be cool if you want to do them. Thanks. -
homozyghost chapter 5 . 5/5/2017
I actually want to see a continuation of this where Ace comes back to Moby Dick with Sabo in tow, reporting in to Marco that the food thief was his brother all along. It would be funny too if Sabo continues to mindblow them by saying he's with the revolutionaries XD Good story btw, would LOVE to more stories like this.
Son of Whitebeard chapter 5 . 5/4/2017
Angry Ace
Shion Lee chapter 5 . 5/4/2017
Love this
hi chapter 4 . 12/10/2016
Thank you! XD
Pokipo chapter 4 . 12/10/2016
I. NEED. MORRRRRRRRREEEEEEE
hi chapter 2 . 8/23/2016
This is cool. But also kind of sad. I just want Sabo to run into them and remember! :(
...Actually, can that be a request? Ace runs into Sabo, realizes he is real, and tries to convince him they are brothers. Sabo doesn't believe him until Ace is in danger or something, and he remembers and saves Ace. Or something. :)
I'd also like to see an AU where the Whitebeard Pirates meet both of Ace's brothers and Thatch starts over-dramatically crying because of how much food all three eat. XD
Rboooks chapter 2 . 8/23/2016
So close. So very close. And yet so far away from each other. Man your one shots are awseome well done!
ztenshi104 chapter 1 . 8/22/2016
Somehow, I have the feeling that this will bring me to tears...