Love Raiden! Love this! Keep it up!

Couldn't raiden just drink the remnant equivalent of Gatorade to replenish electrolytes?

man, please continue this story :(

Update soon please thanks.

Give us more, come on!

Please continue this story I want to see blake's reaction to Raiden in action. Also don't hold back either have a portal suddenly opened up and bring a metal gear Ray to fight Raiden.

I REALLY want to ship Neo and Raiden (Universe help me)

This is pretty good. My only complaint is that everything feels a bit rushed - the characters shouldn't get into arguements about clashing ideals without getting to even know a bit about each other, nor are they to pour their souls to the people they only just met. Things that weigh heavily on the conciousness are usually only told to those that habe earned at the very least a modicrum of trust. Other than that, the idea is really cool, but this really needs more calm moments filled with the characters getting to know each other a bit more between the tension-filled scenes.

These sudden retellings of the whole stories of life to, basically, total strangers seem forced, both from the side of Ruby and Raiden. In general, all conversations feel too rushed.

Story is really good, but I can see it hasn’t been updated in a year, any plans to continue it?

I really hope you continue this great story soon.

UPDATE THE STORY ALREADY! Also, will a version of snake be included?

Hihi~ I wanted to tell you that I absolutely love the story and that you're doing an amazing job. I also wanted to ask if there was going to be any future updates? I'm sorry, you probably get a lot of questions like that, but it's just too good of a story to not ask about. Even if you don't update this one, keep up the good work, you really are doing an amazing job!~

heh... now i know why neo ran away when raven show her red sword in the train

Hmm... So no update huh ?