Yeah, no sympathy for Peter. Fucking moron, what exactly was he expecting when he decided to lie to her.

Hmmm, interesting story you have here. Keep this up for this is a nice project that you have going on here. I love it and look forward to the seeing the next installment.

Interesting chapter and plot and idea

I absolutely love this fanfiction!
Please don't abandon it!

bender for the win

I meant to review this chapter earlier, but I've been busy. But now I'd like to give my honest opinion about what you wrote.

You're right, it is a really good time to be a Spidey fan. I mean, I've loved him ever since I was a little kid; and he's only gotten cooler over the years.

All I know for sure is that I want to be him so bad, faults and all.

I also can't tell you how happy it makes me to read your stories; they are really good.

STAY AWESOME!

Jackal... That guy screams pedophile, sex offender and the biggest pervert in America. Much more disturbing than Hugo Strange's obsession of the Bat and mannequins.

Hello, I just have to say that this story is fucking amazing. Seriously, the characters are fun, likable, and easy to root for. The side characters are also great, Atlee being my favorite, her innocence is just to adorable. The villans are even fun to read about, and I cant wait to see how Francis is going to get his revenge against are favorite wall crawler.

Also, THANK YOU, thank you so much for making a power girl fan fiction where she is not just used for people to gawk at and have weird fantasy's about. You write her with her actual personality, sweet and kind to everyone, noble, as well as giving her a sense of humor. Also I love her cockiness and while she is very king to peter, she'll sometimes show him who has the most power in their relationship. She for me is the best part of this fan fiction, and I don't know if your gonna have crossovers with your other stories or not, I've heard some reviewers say this will happen, but having power girl meeting the younger girlfriends of peter and having a big sister type of relationship with them would be awesome.

Anyway, have a great night and keep being awesome man, thanks.

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Hilarious. I love this and want more of this. Thanks for keeping this going even after 3 years.
You're my hero!

I should be mad your signing his death warrant possibly but I blame the original writers more that and let's face it the fights between Morlun and Pete fighting is always spectacular and it brings a certain feel of possible true death just saying. And Idk about calling the Avengers he might have been able to contact some but something about it the first two fights with Morlun he never allowed much space to make a call easy

Ahh Morlun the great Hunter of spiders here for a fight that should be all but entertaining and with Karen let's see how u match them up I will be here for the show hehe

Puke yes I'mma puke and Peter well he is gonna raise a lotta hell ahh the Evil That Men Do... Make them suffer

Intrigued for sure loving this story so far

What's the third movie? We are far from home and into the spider verse. In the comics are okay right now not sure if you but new person who's after Peter as well as I didn't really fully understand the last kraven the Hunter storyline.

Love how you move humor and sweetness into the story. Loved Fisher and Anna's discoveries about our heroes-totally could believe it from Fisher and Anna's was just hilarious. I'm glad to be seeing more of Karen and Peter's relationship-everything from their banter to fighting together against bad guys to the romantic aspects-as they both recover from his 'death'. I really like how you write their personalities/character, you do a fantastic job at making characters feel real. The more time you take to flesh out a chapter, to let us see details and such, the better it gets because it gives the reader's mental 'eye' more to see and thus, more to connect to in the story. Keep up the good work! Thanks for making my night with a new chapter! Love me some PG!