Reviews for Omnia Mutantur |
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![]() ![]() ![]() i like the couple Legolas x Lili What is the appearance of the twins? And what happens with your height? If they have elven blood i guess they should be taller and prettier The idea is good and interesting but I find it very cruel that Elladan can not be with his children i like the story :3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thumbs up for Sindarin. It IMO is the language of diplomacy and learning (in the latter role alongside Quenya). I always find it jarring that Thorin is typically rendered as not knowing Sindarin. Kili and Fili also should know it. Borys |
![]() ![]() ![]() 1 - why wou carrying an elf be lighjter? Elves are larger than dwarrow ... 2 - thumbs up for correct order of baby and placenta :) 3 - 100 is too late - he would had been an adult for 60 (dwarf) or 50 (elf) years; IMO 50 would 4 - I did notice strong similarities to Kaotic's fic :) Borys |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome update! |
![]() ![]() Is this going to be like Stolen Heir by kaotic312? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I look forward to seeing how this story will progress! I think the background is quite ingenious, and very different from any other 'Kili as a half-elf' fanfic (although there aren't many). I also liked how you added Lili, and I do wonder how you will incorporate her. I can't wait to read about their faces when they realise they are half elf! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome story so far! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excited to read more soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wait but if Elladan was basically a stone and hardly did anything how did Dis get pregnant? |