Reviews for True Mentor
Guest chapter 4 . 7/25
You're right, there's a lot of cliches in this fic, but contrary to your statement, these are not cliches that are cliches because they work. Starting with this chapter, the idea of giving Naruto some made up title like 'Guardian ANBU'. ANBU is NOT a rank, nor is Sannin or Kage, ANBU is a DIVISION of the military, a black-ops division, the equivalent of modern day 'special forces', 'Sannin' is a title or moniker given specifically to Team Sarutobi by Hanzo the Salamander, the word 'Sannin' itself means 'Three Ninja', 'San' meaning 'Three' and 'Nin' meaning 'Ninja', the full title is 'Densetsu no Sannin' meaning 'Legendary Three Ninja'. Kage is a position, like Mayor or Governor. The Sannin and Kage as far as RANK would all be classified as 'Jonin', since this is the HIGHEST rank awarded in the Naruto world. ANBU can apparently be any rank as there have been ANBU whom were of Chunin and Tokubetsu Jonin rank.

People should try something original, if you want to give him a special title above Jonin, use 'Onin' which means 'Great Ninja' or 'Master Ninja' as well as 'Ninja Overlord', this is actually Genshin's title from Ninja Gaiden and is also the technical title of the real Hanzo Hattori from real life.

Second while I'm fine with Kakashi bashing, Sakura bashing gets old, especially when they're shown to be so stupid that they seemingly ignore basic survival instincts, I mean, how do they even survive being a ninja if they're too stupid to recognize when they're in danger? Ninja are not like Dragon Ball Z characters whom face down enemies they know can kick their ass, Ninja are ASSASSINS whom only strike when the situation is in their favor, the only reason they learn extensive combat skills is ironically for the same reason they're used in Assassin's Creed... for getting their asses out of trouble, but Ninja don't go "I will defeat you with my super powers of justice", no, they sneak up on you and stab you, just like an Assassin.

I can see this with Kakashi or Sasuke, Kakashi because Naruto is indirectly the reason Minato is dead, and although Naruto had no control over that, people do stupid shit when they're grieving. As many authors have shown, it could be very easy for Kakashi to think "if you were never born, the Kyubi never would have escaped". There is also the fact that Kakashi could hate Naruto for taking a role he wished, to be Minato's son, that is also very feasible, grief and jealousy are powerful emotions. Sasuke is blinded by revenge, when you are so obsessed with revenge you ABANDON a military force that regularly EXECUTES people for defection, then you're obviously blinded by your hatred.

Sakura however, I don't see, she has no reason to hate Naruto other than him always bugging her for a date, which honestly, it's understandable why she reacts the way she does because WOMEN DO THAT IN REAL LIFE! Seriously, go bug a girl for a date after she repeatedly tells you no, and watch what happens. A shy girly girl like Hinata may put up with it, but a tomboy like Sakura? Nope, you don't take no for an answer, she'll bop you and make you get it through your skull. I know, I've watched it happen. Also, contrary to popular belief, the ONLY time Sakura actually slugged Naruto in CANON is when he used the Sexy Jutsu in front of Konohamaru Corps, which pretty much any woman's going to do, and all other times were not only FILLERS, but Naruto WAS being perverted or was involved. For example, the first time YOUNG Sakura slugged Naruto with super strength is the FILLER episode with that weird yeti thing clinging to his back, she slugged Naruto because that creature which was on Naruto's back grabbed her chest, and she didn't see the creature, so she assumed it was Naruto that groped her. In Shippuden she reacted violently when she visited him in his apartment, saw how filthy it was, and through some comical mishaps ended up with his dirty boxers on her head, again ANY WOMAN will knock your ass out for this. So people REALLY over exaggerate Sakura's belligerence simply because she's easy to bash, but honestly it gets old.

Lastly, the harem, you said to NOT request women because 'They're hot', but that's EXACTLY what YOU'RE doing. You're pairing him with EVERY GIRL who's NOT from Konoha, and not putting any thought into HOW they fit with Naruto. For example, you've got Kurotsuchi blushing over him. Kurotsuchi is a VERY militaristic person and someone whom OBVIOUSLY hates Konoha as Iwa's enemy, in canon, she was willing to RISK the entire world by turning Naruto over to Obito, simply so Iwa could weaken Konoha. She was willing to sacrifice an innocent guy and MILLIONS of innocent lives including PLUNGING THE WORLD INTO AN INFINITE TSUKIYOMI, just to get at Konoha?! Does that REALLY sound like someone even a mature, intelligent Naruto would get with? Yugito is also very militarist and FIERCELY loyal to Kumo, the same village who KIDNAPPED Kushina AND Hinata, BUT everyone thinks, oh, she's a jinchuriki, and Matatabi's going to tell her to jump Naruto's bones. NEWS FLASH! Matatabi is GENDERLESS and probably doesn't even understand the concept of sex, so DOUBTFUL she's going to have any input, and like Kurotsuchi, Yugito is far too militaristic and blindly loyal for Naruto. Him befriending Kirabi is one thing, Kirabi is rebellious and believes in a greater good for EVERYONE, not just Kumo, Yugito is fiercely loyal to Kumo. Karui beat the shit out of him, Samui has less emotions than Koneko Toujo from High School DxD, seriously, Samui makes OPHIS look like Miss Sunshine, and Tsunami... that just doesn't make any sense, she knew Naruto when he was TWELVE!

Also, in regards to the harem, I hope, as time goes on you add new girls from AC that are popping up, like Amunet from Origins, yes, she's married to Bayek, but they lost a child and at the end, they seemingly drifted apart, considering Amunet was present during the assassination of Caesar while Bayek was still off doing whatever, so it could make sense that Naruto got with her, though you'll probably have to revive your prologue a bit since Naruto only spent 800 years in the other world. There is also Kassandra from Odessey, and what about Anne Bonny from Black Flag. BTW, the girl from New Orleans (Assassin's Creed: Liberation), is Aveline de Grandpre, and yes, she would have actually worked well with Naruto, you could have also made Naruto as Altair's father and paired him with Altair's mother, this would have explained Altair's less than Middle Eastern appearance when you compare him to his Assassin brethren, and since Altair's mother is an unknown, you're pretty free to do her as you wish as far as a background.
NightW0lfGaming chapter 8 . 7/7
amazing chapter. cant' wait for the next one :D
NightW0lfGaming chapter 5 . 7/6
Just finished reading chapter 5, amazing story but more importantly. The trilogy, GOD YES. Im so excited and cant wait for you to write more of this story :D
Ashkan Dehno chapter 8 . 7/5
Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far
dragonknight2 chapter 1 . 7/1
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kynan99 chapter 1 . 6/26
Thanks for the awesome chapter.
Guest chapter 8 . 6/25
OH SHIT THAT SOUNDED FUCKING PAINFUL AND HE TOOK IT LIKE A REAL MAN! OH WRONG ANIME( ω)
Guest chapter 6 . 6/25
What about suigetsu he would of made a somewhat decent apprentice
Guest chapter 1 . 6/24
So first chapter and every single cliche in the naruto fan fiction is in the first chapter
KuronoDono12 chapter 8 . 6/24
Cool chapter and I hope Kassandra, Aya, Hope Jensen, Anne Bonney, and Mary Read are brought to Naruto's world as well.

Also an interesting twist would be if the father of Kassandra's son was Naruto and she never was in a relationship with Natakas and instead he was just a good friend to them.
ps2boy.zachary chapter 8 . 6/23
nice work
SPark681 chapter 8 . 6/23
Damn, Naruto did a lot to enforce konoha anyways keep up the great work!
cmech54 chapter 8 . 6/23
Excellent chapter as always. Keep on keeping on, my friend.
biginferno chapter 8 . 6/23
Great chapter I look forward to the next one and hope Tayuya becomes one of Naruto's wives
Rebmul chapter 8 . 6/22
ok so someone is fucking with peoples minds to go after naruto
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