Great Story! Though I wouldn‘t have minded a little happier ending. Especially a heart to heart between the brothers, but I can’t deny that the ending still fit.

You could have at least marked the summary as slash.

OMG! This is amazing! I can't wait for the next update! The Halstead brothers are my favourite I just wish we saw more of them.

This was such an incredible story! I loved everything going on with Will that was a very interesting idea. The i loved the Halsteadx2, especially since it was Jay in the hospital and Will wanting to save him. I loved it!

Please update

So good! Keep the updates coming!