This was really really good. I was a little worried at the party that Harry had died in the war. I had no doubt that Rosalie was his daughter, but you had me worried.

And that last chapter. Having to watch that happen. Must have been so hard. But he never left her. That's what counts.

I now love the bouncing timeline of this. Knowing they're both alive and together, I can relax and enjoy the moments in the past as much as those in the future.

These are great update please

Can't wait for more!

This is fantastic!

I hope you continue this soon.

Will it continue to have the alternating structure of 1998 versus 2011?

What is Bellatrix up to? Is she trying to resurrect Tom?

This is really good. Couple of spelling mistakes, but they don't take away from the story (heck if I wasn't in writers' mode, I wouldn't have noticed.) hope you update soon. Can't wait to continue reading this.

Update please.

Update

Aww loved it! Love the idea of teddy liking rosie.. :-) hope we get to see them together! X

Nice!

This is good. I would prefer it to be in chronological order though.

A great opening chapter! Really well written. Congrats! Cheers!

Excellent chapter!

Kissing her in the morning...felt more real...

That's gorgeous.

And wow - the invasion of the body Snatchers! Very nicely done. Awesome that Harry stuck around, but I'm so worried!

That was an astonishing time jump! I enjoyed seeing the different young people and how you brought out their characters.

This is a charming beginning. Startling with the insta-tensity, but it works for me.