I got emotional with them. That scene with them both holding onto Harry as if trying to hold the pieces together...Damn. In the books he never really cried for anything, he got angry sure, but we never saw him PROPERLY break down at all. It wasn't healthy. He kind of bottled it up. I can kind of get it but at the same time there were moments when it didn't make sense that he didn't let it out. This moment of weakness here, his letting out all of that emotion is what needed to happen.

Love this chapter keep writing this is good.

I really enjoyed this chapter and the portrayal of Dumbledor

It has been two years since the last update. I have read the three chapters so far. Harry should go after every last cent/knut that has been stolen from him. And since Gringotts is supposed to have a copy of the Will they should have opened it the minute they got word of the Deaths of James and Lily and got hold of the Potter's solicitor and barrister to make sure that Harry's Parents wishes were Carried out.

And since from what was shown from the letter will they were not and Dumbledore is in violation. And any executor or someone who claims to be but is not can suffer severer criminal penalties. And many jurisdictions but not all what Dumbledore did would be considered a felony. Do I say for this story Dumbledore should be charged with multiple felony charges?

i hope there will be more. its a amazing storey

Wow this is good

Now I'll be groaning every time harry/daphne will happen XD sorry , eternall tomarry fan gets out of me at times like these xD good job on the chapter ! can't wait for more!

I LOVE IT! ADD MORE PLEASE! AWESOME!

Like it. Looking forward to the next chapter :)

I like the style , interesting that Ron and Hermione are just ok with what Harry tells them . I mean , I think they should be a bit more suspicious , it is the all feared dark lord we're talking about , and they were thought to fear and hate him since very young.

ADD MORE PLEASE!

Wow I find it amazing that it was Ron and Hermione that initally started the ball rolling and agreeing with what Tom had told Harry in the graveyard. I do believe that the Goblins are going to have a great deal of information Harry may or may not be prepared for. More please!

Now there is a twist and a half...how long before Harry starts to think on his own?

doing good can't wait for the next

I can't wait for more I'm already excited lol