I fell like that’s something peridot would do if she had a mini gun. good fanfic.

Are you dead?

please update soon

Glad your back

Poor Peridot...at least she's trying. Archery is a difficult skill to accomplish...

What happens next and when is the next chapter and will the ratting change?

(sorry not sorry) a bow

A little violent but at least you wrote a new chapter!

I liked it! Creative use of words, love the Garnet part, haha! Poor Peridot! Have a good one!

When all else fails, use Steven- and Peridot's ego.

gems can't bruise, scrapes i can understand, but bruises come from internal bleeding, gems don't have blood, they're sentient polymorphic rocks that project their bodies like physical holograms, if you cut peridot's arm off, it'd be like slixing salami, if it was solid green.

Keep going! I want to see what her weapon might be! :)

oh my goodness this is adorable. the way Peridot is referred to as Little Peridot? ADORABLE. Peridot's hopelessness and Steven's encouragement? ADOR. A. BLE.

I think I got my point across.

Very cute story.