Please, more!

10/10 would play this if I this were the newest Zelda installment. It's a simple and clean plot with an interesting angle to the general Zelda storyline. Man, Miyamoto needs to get on this story.

Hiya. I think this a great story, and should be continued. It sucked me in very quickly. It's sorta a new way of looking at Link for me. Also, your OC is not overwhelming, sappy, or a side character. You have a very nice balance. I'd like to see where this story goes.

Holy crap this is awesome!

I don't know a ton about the Zelda games, but I really enjoyed reading this.

I really enjoy this story. I'm not sure it absolutely demands continuation, but I'd definitely read it.

Your writing has a surreal quality that, while deeply disturbing, or maybe because of that quality, can't be left unread. While not as rich as the Lilly-verse, this is a good read. If your muse is willing, then please, tell us the story.

Either way, thank you.

They do say time is a flat circle.

Wonder if Link is still courage and the girl is destined to be power. Or if he is the new power and she the new courage. Or maybe he is the anomaly, with their being a new courage and power on of them being the girl.

I'm interested. It seems like this Hyrule is a lot more modern, what with the guns and ballpoint pens and stuff. Unusual.

This is an interesting start. I am very interested in seeing how your modern take on The Legend of Zelda would play out.

Maybe excellent or cool.

very good

A Zelda game with this kind of character depth would be like manners from heaven. Sadly, it'll probably be a while still till Nintendo gets courageous enough to attempt something like this.

Can pretty much stand on its own, though I certainly wouldn't complain about a second part.

A very interesting little story - enough to make me actually come out of the woodwork and review it, which is a rarity I'll admit. It's been a long while since I read a LoZ story, longer since a good one.
Haunting, and very well written - exactly what I love to read.

So, Link as the Dragon Reborn. I can dig it.