Sucks the sequel is dead

Okay two mistakes you made with AIs. Neural implants are needed for Omega to infect anyone. Unless the helmet automatically does that. Also even without a helmet he girls should’ve been able to see Church.

Also we’re you not aware Burnie voices Ruby and Yang’s dad.

Ah Ruby is just so sweet. I’m surprised she didn’t get embarrassed with the practice with Caboose.

I gotta say I love you keep them all in character. Ruby seems a little too innocent and clueless at times. And I like how they (reds and blue) aren’t being introduced to the girls right off the bat of what they are known for. Grif doesn’t make it known right there that he’s lazy and a eater.

So that rwby rvb story is dead

Where's Tucker at I need that

Tucker: Bow Chicka Bow Wow. *and many more pickup lines after *

I love it. I think you should make a series about this!

grif and yang doing puns, you are a comedic genius!

this was awesome, i love the way you made this story and i totally imagine this is how the characters would interact with eachother, personally i would've liked if they had stayed and tried to save tex before the bomb went off and in the end the reds and blues would create the device to send them home but this was still good, i also read into your sequel and that's good to, introducing team JNPR is a great idea and i can't wait to see how that story ends. also is it possible to write on this site, i wanna try to put my own stories on this site.

keep up the good work and maybe see if you can send this to rooster teeth, i think they would love to read this.

I just wanna say this is going in my bookmark of “top favorite stories to reread”. You stick to the plot line so closely yet there’s also that wonderful degree of flexibility to make it entertaining.

To bad they couldn't see what happened to church

Season 9 showed us that the Freelancers could see their A.I.s without their helmets.

I like to think that if you decide to put in Grimm again, they should be vulnerable to alien laser weaponry and at least take SOME damage from Carolina’s shock baton.

I love this series. Please keep it up.

Grif is the last name. It’s Kaikaina Grif.

Your doing a good job, I can tell this is going to be good.