Perfect

Fun! Also, NO CAPES!

LOVE IT!

What an awesome way to combine Incredibles with Miraculous Ladybug! This is so well-written and clever!

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I really like Edna here, you seem to have nailed her character well. I also love the callback to The Incredibles with the "and guest" and "machine washable" bits. A few typos here and there ("handsom," a "your" that should be "you're," some dialogue punctuation, etc.), but overall quite well-written and a nice read. Good luck with your future work. :)

Here is my idea for the story :
The pars go to Paris on vacation and Bob and Helen ask dash and violet to watch jack jack while they are on date night. Instead, they get alya to babysit and go out to explore the city. Meanwhile, marinette visits alya and notices jack jack and asks who he is. Alya responds that she only has him for tonight and suddenly jack jack spots some cookies that marinette brought and reaches for one. When alya pulls him back he transforms into his monster form causing marinette and alya to panic. Bob and Helen get a call that their baby is out of control and head over to pick him up. They are furious at the kids for sneaking out, leaving jack jack with a stranger, and ruining their date. Marinette returns home in shock from what happened. The next day she and alya tell everyone about it but they all laugh at them except Adrian. After school, alya goes home to find Bob and Helen talking with her parents about jack jack. Alya's mother says that jack jack is to never go near her daughter again or else she will sue Bob and Helen for child endangerment. Alya responds that she is overreacting and that nobody was even hurt. Bob and Helen decide they have no choice but to admit that jack jack has powers. Just then, marinette arrives on the scene hearing the last part about powers. She asks (out of curiosity )what kind of powers he has besides the one they saw last night. They explain that he had 17 power's in total from laser eyes to turning on fire. This attracts alya's full attention and she wants to record jack jack on phone using his powers but her mother forbids alya to even see the kid again, and threatens to have the athorities take the baby away if it happens again alya's father arrives just then and tell's his wife that now she's not only overreacting, but now s

Here is my idea for the story :
The pars go to Paris on vacation and Bob and Helen ask dash and violet to watch jack jack while they are out on date night. Instead of d

Here is what should've happened:
The pars go to Paris on vacation and Bob and Helen ask dash and violet to watch jack jack while they are out date night. Instead, they get alya to babysit and go out to explore the city. Meanwhile, marinette visits alya and notices jack jack and asks who he is. Alya responds that she only has him for tonight and suddenly jack jack spots some cookies that marinette brought and reaches for one. When alya pulls him back he transforms into his monster form causing marinette and alya to panic. Bob and Helen get a call that their baby is out of control and head over to pick up jack jack. They return to the hotel angry at the kids for sneaking out, leaving jack jack with a stranger, and ruining their date. Marinette returns home in shock from what happened. The next day she and alya tell everyone about it but they all laugh at them (especially cloue ) (ecsept Adrian who wants to see the kid ) they return to alya's house to find the place ripped up and the pars standing next to the door to apologize for what happened. They decide they have no choice but to admit that jack jack has powers. While everyone else think 's it's cool, cloue wants proof. She gets it when she sees him fly. At that moment, underminer surfaces and takes the mayor hostage. Ladybug and cat noir suet up and so do the incredibles. They team up to defeat the underminer.

Here is what I would have the story be like:
The pars go to Paris for vacation and the kids are told to watch jack jack while mom and dad are on date night. Instead dash and violet get alya to babysit him. Marinette meets violet and while babysitting, alya sees jack jack using his powers and calls his parents. Bob and Helen are furious at the kids not only because they snuck out of the hotel without permission, but also left jack jack with a stranger a

Nice story!

Cool story. I like the funny interactions between Mari and Edna.
While I know the Imp's not supposed to have any basis "Bestowed powers by inter-dimensional portal, largely used to fight monsters emerging through portal" sounds like Danny Phantom.

It was a really good idea, thanks for that. Indeed, the end is a bit rushed, but I liked your story and the relationship between Edna and Marinette.

This was really cool! Good job! I love Edna Mode from the Incredibles("Good God, you've gotten fat." XD) and Miraculous Ladybug is quite possibly (definitely) my obsession, so it was great to see the two mix!
Speaking of which, is it just me, or does the shadowy outline of Hawkmoth's face in Origins Part 1, at that point where Hawkmoth's all "your Miraculous is in my control!", does that remind anyone else of Frozone's outline? Like, I know it's really Gabriel Agreste (hope I didn't spoil that for anyone who hasn't seen The Collector yet O.O), but it just reminds me of Frozone's outline. Does anyone else see that?

Two things:
1)When Adrien, Chloe, and Marinette were behind the scenes for the fashion show, Chloe called Adrien "hansom". The correct spelling is "handsome", just so you know :)
2)"...Adrien, who had rebelled from Gabriel's planned vision for him to become a school teacher much to the shock of all but those who really knew him..." The way you've written it makes it unclear whether Adrien chose to become a school teacher or Gabriel planned for him to become a school teacher but Adrien rebelled. I would rewrite it as "...Adrien, who had rebelled from Gabriel's planned vision for him in favor of becoming a school teacher, much to the shock of all but those who really knew him..." The sentence is in the second paragraph after the (10 years later), by the way, in case you want to take my suggestion.

This gave me an idea for a story, I can make a small allusion to your story if you want.