Do you draw all your cover work? Please tell meeeeeeeeee! 'Cause if you do, IT LOOKS AWESOME!

Your story was fantastic, it doesn't take much to make me cry so I sobbed, your a fantastic author

Let me start by saying this review is not a flame, but constructive criticism because I feel like you could have really gone places with this story.
You’re not a terrible writer. Your grammar is good, spelling, etc. It’s the story that lost me.
You said that you weren’t going to write a sequel because you were worried about Tess becoming a Mary Sue. She is a Mary Sue and she had been since chapter one. The good news is that in comic books most superheroes are kind of Mary Sues so it could have worked. But you took it just too far.
She somehow has all of these powers. She can pick up Thor’s hammer. Everyone feels like they need to protect her and that she’s their sister or daughter or aunt. She knows about Clint’s Family. Apparently she could beat Black Widow? She helped create Vision. It was too much.
Still, I tried to be optimistic because it was only thirteen chapters and there are so few quicksilver/oc stories. But now that I’ve finished it ... that’s what I’ve noticed.
For a quicksilver story there was not a lot of build up for their relationship. It was disappointing and rushed. And left me wondering why I was supposed to care about Tess and her relationship.
You want your readers to be invested? Give them something to invest in. And I did not see that in this story.

OMG. I freaking loved this story! It made me cry and made me laugh. You are truly gifted at writing. Please don't give up on writing. It is amazing.

THIS WAS AMAZING, THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR WRITING THIS

JESUS CHRIST, WAY TO HIT ME IN THE FEELS. I CANT BELIEVE IT'S ALMOST OVER. YOU MADE ME CRY

I am crying like full on crying not like tears in my eyes they are falling down my face. This is when you know it is well written.

I feel like crying this is so sad! Please tell me the tesseract is going to keep her alive? Or project tahiti?

When it came to her death the first time,I was on the verge of crying but this time I AM crying and I couldn’t stop the tears so “thank you” (sarcastically said) for breaking my heart.

Btw I actually really loved this chapter and I can’t wait for the next one!

That's it? That's the ending? I need more! Please? Okay then... T.T

Woo! Still live this the second time around! I look forward to more!

YES YES YES! The ship is happening! I love how you incorporated Tess into the small parts while not completely changing the story

Thank you for updating again so soon! I love the way you incorporated snippets of some of the scenes from the actual film when they're evacuating the city, it's so clever!

I am dying over this fiction. Absolutely love it, I love how you're delving into Tess's backstory. I'm curious to find out more about her link to Pietro.

Can't wait for the next chapter!

This was a beautiful chapter and a great was to end this chapter and I can’t wait for more!