SHIRO. MY SON. MY WONDERFUL SUFFERING SON.
Also lmao five seconds into alien prison and Shiro gets a fanclub. I love it.
Also the utter lack of fucks that Zarkon gives about the entire situation. Dude sounds bored.
Nice callback to the first part, with the hair-grabbing thing. Poor Shiro.

Your writing is so awesome. I could literally see it all happening in my head :D Awesome job!

Awesome writting!

I love the sequel, and the amount of detail put into it. :)