I still don't get the way you make Giles always go after Michael its very irrational why can't he keep it to himself i feel like you are intentionally trying to make Giles the bad guy for no reason

come on man or girl (I don't know) have a little sense of adventure let him leave it's a good plot point and have him come back like really strong like in a year or something that way everyone has a while to think about what they did to him.

Do you plan to finish this story because I started to read this story the other day and saw you haven't updated it in a while

Please don't let you character be abused. There is no reason for him to take that shit, if pushed into a corned he should just put some of them down

Please do something about zander, truthfully he is not needed that much. I hope you have the shit beaten out fo him and do not let him go with not remembering. Make him grow up or have his ass beaten when he gets out of line. You OC should not have to take shit from the pathetic creatin.

Go Bessel on themm! Hope he gets his other half back soon.

MAKE A WEAPON! I hate seeing int he show her walking with no true protection.
Loved the new chapter. Great job so far. I think this is going to be interesting seeing some New developments. I am glad to see you follow canon to a point, but I hope you skip some of the shit (like her being with angel at all) and go strait to them being a couple.

I am really hoping you keep this a multi pairing, alway love your stories that have it.
Have you thought about a familiar? Battle Companion? Weapon? Potions? There are so many directions you can take this, I hope you take it into a new direction and possible add some other crossover references !

Please have him save the principle!

Thanks again, Keep up the amazin work

Great chapter on the warlock of Sunnydale, so can you please put up the next chapter to the story now please

Update please

Love the book please update soon

I just want to say I truly loved this story and all the characterization of the characters. I hope that you continue it as it has soo much potential. Thank you again for this wonderful story :)

I feel like you are trying to force Michael and Amy together

I really don't want to see Michael with two girls, but your choice ig.
Other then that great story so far

Hope you keep going! (-:

Nice! Very few spelling mistakes! Well written, not clunky! Good job!