| Reviews for The Pharaoh's Harem |
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   Puzzleship4life chapter 4 . 6/16 You never finished it?! |
| SkySirenYugiohLover chapter 1 . 4/3/2019 I’m a little confused about the story because the summary sounds so different but besides that it was great! |
| Guest chapter 4 . 3/14/2018 Trop cool |
| Lune chapter 4 . 9/11/2017 J'adore Atem et Yugi sont tellement mignons, et adorables surtout quand il sont gênés. J'espère en tout cas qu'une telle fonction aura bientôt une suite, je l'attends avec impatience. |
| GreenAppleBling chapter 4 . 7/22/2017 All right, Atem and Yugi are really cute been so embarrased and awkward about showing they like each other... But, where's Yami? I better have my amount of Monarch/Mobiumshipping! I'm sure he would spice things up! Just kidding. I just hope that you would update soon a chapter that includes my beloved Yami (God, I'm such a fangirl for him...) |
| Stephiel9816 chapter 4 . 5/30/2017 Oh Oh Yugi I wonder what you guys are planning to do?! Will you be saved from your abusive parents?! Or will you go back to the abusive home?! Will you make other friends?! |
| Stephiel9816 chapter 3 . 5/30/2017 That was definitely entertaining! Great job! |
| Stephiel9816 chapter 2 . 5/30/2017 Love it! |
| Stephiel9816 chapter 1 . 5/30/2017 Poor Yugi! Did Atem see that Yugi was in pain and scared?! Very curious... Good job! |
| Guest chapter 4 . 4/10/2017 Thank you for all the work that you put into this chapter. I hope that Atem and Yugi can find a way to stay together. |
| InuYoiushi chapter 4 . 4/11/2017 Cool chapter, I can't wait to see what happens next for them. |
| thor94 chapter 4 . 4/10/2017 touching chapter. but yugi parents are bastards, at least atem and yugi know about this. |
| Alice chapter 3 . 12/12/2016 ** Overload ** please update |
| Miqu chapter 3 . 10/28/2016 oohh ! cant waaiittt till the next chap! also i love sanity shipping there's not enough fanfics about it! |
| ThePancake chapter 3 . 10/25/2016 Yooo waffle-chan! So here we go! I think the chapter was nice. That's good and at the same time that's a problem. The two other chapters had more tension because of Yugi's parents. Here, we have no bad guy and that makes the whole thing kind of boring. I feel like Yugi could have worried about his parents' reaction all the time and in the end they see him all dirty when he comes back and get mad again. Something like that, something that makes you worry about the characters. You did that great in the chapters before. Authors need to be mean to their characters and you weren't mean enough here. ;D And while the moments between Yugi and Atem were nice they weren't strong enough to carry the chapter on their own. Having Atem teach Yugi how to ride and how Yugi is all nervous because he sees Atem shirtless are funny and sweet scenes. But I think it would have been better if they had been mixed with some drama. ;3 Personally, I didn't like how in the end Yugi asks Atem to stop undressing him and Atem doesn't listen. I know it was supposed to be funny but whenever I see or read someone ignore a person's "No" it always makes me really uncomfortable. Also, you used the word "blush" quite a lot here. ;D I really don't want to discourage you. The weaknesses I mentioned are things you didn't do in the chapters before, so don't take it too much to heart. You can do better and you already proved it. ;3 |
