Reviews for The Story of the Dragon Pirate
Zanri chapter 5 . 7/11
I love it. You've captured Hancock personality and Goku naiveness so perfectly! Love it...
Mario 64 chapter 23 . 6/26
U did a fantastic job on this story I'm really enjoying it but to be honest I think Hancock and Naomi should both end up with Goku since I haven't seen anyone try or even both making their own story featuring them in their own story and I just feel for once they both should end up with him I know Goku can be a ladies man even though he's to dense to notice or even realize it (like another certain character from the Pokemon anime series I know of) after reading this story so far I feel he can be paired with nami Hancock and possibly Robin reason for this suggestion because I know this story I feel is the only one will have that opportunity to do so since no one has even tried yet since I first came to DBZ x one-piece cross over session so I'm asking could you please just this once have Goku end up with nami Hancock and possibly Robin and also finally stop being dense and notice the girls feelings for him I understand being dense and being a bit of a idiot is part of his character I really do but he definitely needs to start acting like a mature adult think things a little more differently than he usually would and also finally start realizing not just his own feelings for them but there's towards him to it's funny and fun to watch at first but after a while and seeing him be so dense at the most obvious things dose start getting old and annoying I think Goku needs a wake up call and it would be a bit more fun and interesting seeing nami tease and flirt with Goku here and there after everything she seen him do especially seeing how muscular his body is she should have taken at least a small interest in him like how Hancock did after getting to know Goku more when they first met on the island
Guest chapter 34 . 6/25
Plz make more chapters!
Guest chapter 16 . 6/24
Have him finally realize his own feelings for nami and Hancock instead him just being dense all the time I know it's part of Goku's character but even he has to grow up and start thinking things a little different than before and it gets annoying seeing him not notice a girls feelings towards him
Guest chapter 16 . 6/24
I started reading this story almost a week ago I'll say u did a fantastic job and this was the first DBZ x one peice crossover story I read and after reading this I'm definitely interested in seeing this story continue forward and hopefully Goku gets ultra instinct at some point and and another thing can you also pair nami with Goku to where Hancock and Naomi share Goku as their boyfriend just those two no one else I suggested her because she's never been paired with Goku before from the DBZ x one piece stories I came across just this once can u have him be in a small hearm where it's just those two girls and Goku plus I think nami and Goku make a cute and interesting couple to after reading up to this point I feel at least once nami should be with Goku to not just Hancock the girl Goku met when he first arrived in the one peice universe where the island has only girls if possible can you give her a chance please give it a chance from what I can tell I really don't see anyone plan to do that kind of paring Goku x nami stories anytime soon either
STAND UP PROUD chapter 34 . 6/24
So,when are you gonna make a new .
Guest chapter 24 . 6/7
Making him realize his fealings is dumb , dont get me wrong but goku actually undersanding love? Yeah not in a million years i would think that , and it alsl feels to off character
Denzel Hines chapter 12 . 5/30
You should put ultra instinct in
Monster King chapter 34 . 5/27
Awesome
SEEKING639 chapter 34 . 5/26
You are wrong about boa hancock vs monet... hancock Eliminates her Without breaking a sweat.. hancock doflamingo or stronger than him.. goku haha can kick vergoCaesar monet 100.000 soldiers At the same time goku Faster than time 0.000001 sec One punch to the face And he breaks his skull ...
There is no feeling that he (goku) is invincible...
He just wants to adjust himself to the opponent and not eliminate them quickly
good job with the stroy ..
midnightscar17 chapter 13 . 4/27
I loved goku outsmarting nami
midnightscar17 chapter 9 . 4/27
Always despised chichi
midnightscar17 chapter 6 . 4/27
Um do people realize it takes alot tojust write 5k. Ive seen some chapters range from 5k to 40k
Guest chapter 9 . 3/31
That disgust there is no doubt that you do not know how to create a story you simply added fights but keeping the result the same if Goku were in that world he could get Ace from being executed in 2 seconds And don't make me laugh Goku was so weak that he couldn't stop them from taking ACE? Hahaha if I didn't spend 1 minute and fought against a bunch of assholes and there's no weakness to create a story that preserves Everything from an anime is easy to create a story that modifies these results is what everyone should do if not simply not write anything
xxx639 chapter 34 . 3/15
Why didn't you let goku fight vergo You have to end this punk hazard arc and move on to dressrosa arc...
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