This story is really good dude, keep up the good work and hope you update soon.

I love this story so much. I am really happy that the grammar has gotten so good. Keep going it’s fun to read!

These beginning chapters are so rough that I'm forced to drop.
I recommend revising them. Especially the spelling.

I feel so bad for Han... Some grammar mistakes, but they might get better in the later chapters.

I like the idea of this story but I just can't handle reading it with all the spelling and grammar mistakes. Most noticeably tow instead of two but there's plenty of others, including wrong uses of there/their/they're.

Please, please, please get a beta. For now, it's going to stay in my bookmarks for when it hopefully is proof read in the future.

A well done chapter. Jinpachi is quite the interesting character with his talks about how he tortures someone as well as what he was doing before the crisis that took place in the prison. It was endearing to read how Ryuzetsu and Utakata interacted with one another this time around and now she will be following him it would seem. Tobi doesn't slow down that is for sure as he captures Satori for his own group. That just spells trouble down the line that is for sure. With this, the arc ends and a new one will start. Can't wait to see what it could be. Thank you. Keep up the good work.

I have to say this far this story is great. However I am not sure if you were purposely spelling two as tow or if its a mistake. Otherwise it's interesting. Thank you for writing!

I was pretty sure that most rest Seven Swordmen died at Hand of Guys father I think .

Obito thinks he control the Demon Satori stupid fool their was reason that was lock up and buried because no one could control it .

Kind of like how no one should able control the ten tailed beast since not even the Sage of Six Paths could he had defeat then seal it into self ,create moon around its body and on his death divided its power into the Nine tailed beasts .

Interesting fact, Roshi was a Jinchuuriki for 40 years when he was captured by the Akatsuki on the anime... but I don't know how old Han was...

Your story is interesting. I wonder if you will include a scene where the beasts and hosts go through a tough time with each other. Also i don't know if you understand me since you first language is german. So danke. Please continue writing it is good and also i am still waiting for the lemons.

A well done chapter. Quite interesting to read that the Seven Swordsmen are helping with this mission as well as the fact that they all stayed together. It was amusing to read how Jinpachi was able to rile Utakata up to have him move to where Ryuzetsu will be. It was humorous to read what Utakata went through as well as thought as he went into the showers. Quite interesting what Saiken was able to do in order to scare off much of the prisoners. Now it would seem someone is keeping an eye on him though. Thank you. Keep up the good work.

The darker tone is good. As always danke.

This chapter was beautiful and bitter sweet especially the reunion with itachi. Good job. Danke.

A well done chapter. The interaction between Utakata and Saiken was interesting and amusing as they have a bit of heart to heart about having peace and quiet as well as Utakata having a possible crush on Ryuzetsu. It would seem he was able to go in and met quite the site as well as an interesting ally. I wonder what sort of trouble these three can do while being here. Thank you. Keep up the good work.

A well done chapter. Nicely done with how Itachi and Roshi were able to save Tayuya. Quite the desperate attempt, but they were able to get help from the Akatsuki and now kmove to safety. It would seem they have a new home now with Tayuya opening the gates to the Uzumaki compound. It will be interesting to read how Danzo and the council will react to the fact they have sanctuary. Not to mention the mission Utakata will be undertaking. Thank you. Keep up the good work.