ahhh myyy goddd my heart i loved this so much :) i adore soulmate au's and this was so nice

This was extremely well-written and entertaining! I love this concept so much great story!

I totally fell in love with it, like you cant imagine how much I love it, and I knew it all the time which moment was the boom for each of them and I love you because if you get it and I get it then it means it was mean to be

"Lastly, Ash Ketchum doesn't have a soulmate, and doesn't even seem to really care about finding his."

"She doesn't think about a Prince Charming coming to sweep her off her feet anymore because she's found her own footing..."

These two lines are probably my favourite bits, because they are so indicative of Ash's mentor-y effect on May, and how incredibly much May grows on her journey (she was probably the poké-girl with the best arc). I also love how it is only when May lets go of this ideal romance that she starts to see Drew, and gains her mark.

I'll have to admit I actually read this before Pieces of a Whole, and maybe it's because of that factor that I adore this one even more than I adore Pieces of a Whole, and that's a looooot of adoration because I loved that one! I love how you take us through May's journey and incorporate parts and pieces from from Pieces of a Whole into this story. It shows the beginning, the end, and all the little moments in between where you made me feel like I was falling in love along with May.

Absolutely amazing, and ahhh, it's so beautiful! I really love your writing!

Oh my gosh this story! I loved the world you created in Pieces of a Whole and I was so excited to read this! I love how you took us through the whole of May's life and incorporated facts from Pieces of a whole, and the ending was just magical :)

A soulmate fic! I like the idea that the name only comes when you start having feelings, and not right from birth. This feels, less destiny and more like a mood ring, that shows how you feel and not what to feel. Love it

I like it, great job!

This is cool! I am a sucker for soulmates au! There are even a few more like... they are color blind until they gaze to their soulmates' eyes, or a timer where it will go off when they found each other... Maybe you should do more after you finished Sand? I'm actually a follower of Sand and I'm so excited for the last chapter!