maybe it's just me but I would like a list of names for the next generation and who's who's kid. I'm being thrown about 5 characters at once and their names sound almost too similar. Other than that, the characters are good. That aren't a carbon copy of their parents which is good. Shows personality

This part of Laxus was sweet. Cana giving birth was a little bit of experience for me because I'm always squeamish around birthing stories but I like the new parent-child bond

I was at first lost by what was happening but as soon as it fell into place that this was a funeral, I understood. It was unexpected as I figured it would jump into the next generation but this is a good start to something new. A death for a new generation, hmm, poetic even?

This story is unexpectedly really good! I've craving some Laxana and this story is exactly what I need!
I'm also curious to see how this all turns out!
Anyway, please keep on writing!

I can see Laxus taking over the guild, it's fitting because of his grandfather. And the argument between farther and son, I can see things quickly getting out of hand. It's the tempers. It's also interesting to see your take on the children of the Fairy Tail members. I'm looking forward to more of them as well as what everyone looks like as they aged ha.

Alright, this is pretty good. It sounds like you got Laxus and Cana down pat ha. I like the detail, and the dialogue. Keep up the effort.

to say this is well-written, is an understatement.
your natural writing style is immersive, and you can feel the emotions that the characters themselves are, even Laxus, and I don't connect with him very well usually.
I love the plot and drama that you have set up, and can't wait to see where you go with it.

EYY I DIDN'T COME HERE FOR FEELS *crying* OKAY THIS IS AMZINGLY WELL WRITTEN GJ