Reviews for The Fervent Crimson Flame
Meazm chapter 33 . 12/2/2016
Nice chapter !
WolfGaming chapter 33 . 12/2/2016
Pretty good chapter. Sorry I don't have much to say. I'm super tired and need to sleep, lol
Meazm chapter 32 . 12/1/2016
Nice chapter. I like to see angel is different in this story. Keep it up !
Angryhenry chapter 32 . 11/30/2016
The italicized him gajeel refered to was happy right?
Yami-Urami chapter 32 . 11/30/2016
I would laugh if nirvana made everyone change sides nd oracion seis become the good guys
Meazm chapter 31 . 11/27/2016
Nice story , man. Love natza ! Kinda pity and relief for jellal that he was dead. For pairing, I think mira is more suitable with laxus. Because of their intrection in canon. And they have picture together at the front of one of the chapter.. I can't remember which chapter. But, anyway that's my opinion. But keep Natza ! Hahaha
Guest chapter 31 . 11/25/2016
Mira x Gray please...
I ship them so hard
guest chapter 31 . 11/25/2016
Please no mira and gray just no I just don't see her with him no matter the story ( mainly because I'm an Nastu x Erza x Mira supporter) . And I brought up Gajeel and Kagura because I saw something there but what you said brings up something that always bathers me with writers just because Nastu and Ezra are together ( and hopefully Gajeel and Kagura) doesn't mean everyone should be paired with someone I never understand why authors do that all of a sudden everyone is with someone it just feels off somehow it feels like it takes away from the story I don't know that's just my feelings on it.
IanViste chapter 31 . 11/25/2016
A fine piece of art
WolfGaming chapter 31 . 11/25/2016
Pretty good chapter. Although, I don't see the poll on your profile.
Yami-Urami chapter 31 . 11/25/2016
I agree with your last statement so let's Natza the site up! Great chapter by the way, I enjoyed the banter between gajeel and Lyon also i can't wait to see how you use nirvana in this it as so many possibilities
Guest chapter 30 . 11/22/2016
Yes Jellal is dead now as long as he stays that way we're all good. And I'm still waiting on the Natsu and Gajeel friendship, and Gajeel and Kagura... you know what you have peeked my interest and I don't even think you meant to and those two together normally wouldn't work mostly because I don't think they have ever talked to each other in canon and are in different guilds but because your story has become so different it has given way to new possibilities. Now first off I like Levy I think she's smart, cute and a hell of more likeable than Lucy and their whole "relationship" is okay with me I don't hate I even think it's cute but it's always just bee there and you never really give it a second glance because the story isn't about them. but then I read then chapter and after I read that moment with those two I thought "they would make a pretty good couple" but I couldn't figure out why I thought about two people that have never talked to each other in canon. Then it hit me they're just like Natsu and Ezra but then I thought about Levy and her "relationship" with Gajeel and I came to a horrible realization that the Gajeel and Levy thing is damn near a mirror image of Natsu and "her" (we don't say her name anymore but you know who I mean) now you may have already figured it out but I JUST figured it out and it pisses me off. But if Natsu and Gajeel are going to be mirror images of each other in some ways it stands to reason that he would want a strong "mate" for lack of a better word, someone that can stand by him in a fight and not have to babysit. I mean Gajeel has been known to envy Natsu as seen with him wanting his own cat (don't know how you plan on fixing that one...side note where's Happy I didn't see him in this chapter) so if he sees Natsu with a strong woman by has side he way start to look around for a woman that in theory could beat Erza because beating Erza is beating Natsu (I'm trying to get inside the mind of Gajeel and I think that's how his train of mind would go lol) at least that's how it would start with him. And as far as Kagura goes I don't know what see would think but this could be a good way to bring the Natsu and Gajeel friendship along. You could have Gajeel ask Natsu have help about Kagura about how to make a strong woman yours or something along those lines I don't know I'm just throwing out ideas for you with these two because the more I think about it the more I'm really staring to warm up to the two of them together ( I'm getting fired up lol) and it has the side benefit of bring Natsu and Gajeel closer together which is always awesome. You could just pair them off in this Arc so there're alone and see where it goes from there no rush. One last thing I think it would be a cute little moment if you could have Wendy ask Natsu if she could take has last name you know so she can really be part of the family. That's all update soon
treyalexander63917 chapter 30 . 11/22/2016
I think they get motion sickness as a sign that they ate more proficient with their Dragon Slayer Magic. Remember Natsu had better senses and was the better Dragon Slayer than Gajeel and Wendy at the beginning(he unlocked dragon force three times and was the first to use a secondary element and). When Gajeel's senses and magic improved as the series continued he gained motion sickness. When Wendy unlocked dragon force in tartaros and mastered it after the time skip, she gained motion sickness. So really its just a sign that they are getting stronger really.
WolfGaming chapter 30 . 11/22/2016
Ayy, pretty good! I must sleep now.
Guest chapter 30 . 11/22/2016
I thank you for blessing us with these natza stories as the natza archive seems to be at a stand still as of late
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