Reviews for Say You'll Remember Me |
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![]() ![]() Plot twist: Joker falls in love with batty and so does Harley but Jonny likes Harley and Batman likes jonny |
![]() ![]() I like your fiction ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved this. All of your characters felt so real to their original's. I loved them. . Great work |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great Fanfic so far can't wait to read more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Daaamn that was a badass fic. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i liked your story :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() "I usually have help." Love the therapy dialogue, awesome touch! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Chapter 2—I love the parallel with the Joker repeating 'Where is she?', the irony is kinda delicious. The opening introspection from Frost is an awesome way to show the Joker's state of mind without taking us straight into his head, leaves a little mystery. Some of the dialogue tags are a little confusing (action tags for one person straight after the dialogue for someone else can confuse a little as to who's speaking, like when the Joker's men raise their guns in the immediate sentence after the 'show me the money' request), but that's totally minor. Great job so far! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Flicking through reviews and accidentally spoiled myself, oops! Revisiting this story after a couple of months away from my own fic and I'm so glad to see it's completed—gonna start from the beginning so it's fresh in my mind. Excited! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice story |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm not sure what revenge mr.j will do next to those guys... but i feel like he should have put a bomb in one of the bags and set it off as the drove away... with flames of money raining down on them... HAHAHAHAHAHA ... |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hate that the story is over... I loved it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Can't believe this story has come to an end, and I've loved every chapter! Especially this one :D I've loved your writing and look forward to more in the future! :) x |
![]() ![]() Great story! |
![]() ![]() It was lit |