Oh I quite like this! You did a great job getting inside Draco's mind. This is such an interesting pairing because Luna would allow him to be himself.

Damn right in the feels

Very good! :)

Pretty good! I could feel the emotions everytime, the apathy in the beginning, the excitement during the chase, and the pain and fear at the end. I did see a few grammatical errors like leaving a word out but even professional authors do that.

You have the touch for writing. Keep up the good work with more Druna stories! What's interesting about this pairing is there are so many dimensions that can be played with. Good job with the imagery and the tone :)