For a fic that was purely smut, and rough smut too, this was...
This was beautiful. That's the only way I can put it.
Thank you for creating this beautiful thing.

Oh my. I really enjoy the build up here, and how you contrast Pyrrha and Cinder with Yang and Winter~

So that ending got me even more exited, i love the way cinder goes from a proud to a im gonna dominate you all and fuck you like a maniac

Awesome just awesome:)