I still reread this. A work of brilliance. Pity the hiatus.

Sorry for the anon review, but I really love this thing. Is it possible for you to continue this, even though it's been 2 years?

i love this story so much, please continue if you get the chance, I've been dying to read more

Good morning,

I’ve just found your story and am only on chapter 16 but I wanted to say thank you for writing this. It’s actually changing my mind about how I would act if I were to ever go back in time. I’ve always been of the mindset that if you knew someone would grow up to be a rapist and you didn’t stop them because they haven’t technically committed that crime (in the past that you’re now in), then you are responsible for allowing that crime to occur when it eventually does.

Your story turns that on its head by making the past a new universe where enough has changed that you can’t act with that same confidence because it might be different enough that they might not actually do it.

Always appreciate thought provoking stories.

Thanks,
G.

Well knowing that Mr. Unnamed God may have been manipulating Ron into focusing on Violet so much makes that a bit more palatable. It was getting silly how focused on her he was, how utterly forgiving.

Black and Granger had Granger petrified and framed Ron for it. They wanted him involved, Violet didn't, so now Violet is pissed they did it anyways.
And Ron is still being their little bitch boy. Daphne even calls him out for kowtowing to themhonestly, does Ron have no self esteem whatsoever in this story?

Again, Ron is way too forgiving and gentle and really just a pussy in general with Violet/Hermione. No 12 year old who was nearly murdered multiple times the year prior would be like that.
That alone breaks his cover as non-reincarnated wide open, relying on plot armor to keep going.

Ron's failing here is trying to include his friends in his meetings with Violet. They have no place there and are only messing things up. As well as being so fucking passive with Hermione. He needs to smack her back downif he acted like an actual Ron with no memories like he's trying to pull off he wouldn't be so infinitely forgiving towards her.

In this, I disagree with his thought process. For all purposes, his Hermione is dead. Ron is widowed. Ron's dead wife either wants him to be happy, or her opinion on who he remarries to is irrelevant.

If after this he still bows to the whims of the Greengrasses it'll have ruined the story. That's just far too pathetic.

Ron is being a major fucking pussy here. He can get all the answers he needs by just not bending over for the Greengrasses. He is in very real danger here and he's just letting them throw him into the fire. He needs to stop letting them back off and just throw down and call them on it.

I must say I don't really buy that an Auror/Unspeakable Ron married to Hermione and brother in law to Fleur wouldn't know a hell of a lot more French than yours does.

How can Ron truly be this dense? Or is this denial? Not sure, but it's annoying to read, personally. I don't care if it's a teen who is dense, that's fine, but a reincarnated adult like this has no excuses.

Wonder if Violet will be in the competition with him.

I disagree with not telling them. It seems like he could convince Violet pretty easily, and honestly Hermione just needs to be obliviated at this point.