Go fuck yourself, bitch. Glad you're gone.

pm me when you rewrite p.s. if you can't decide in the future paired naruto with I can recommend Boa Sandersonia or Charlotte Smoothie or Charlotte Amande

tertarik... aku tertarik... ceritanya jelas banget dari awal... mudah2han lanjutannya gak jadi random

There is no way any of the Shinobi would have been caught, especially Sasuke and Sakura. Sakura has super strength, and Sasuke is well... Sasuke.

let me know when the rewrite is up

Sigh... I'm a HUGE One Piece fan. But nothing in the OP verse could harm the Rabbit Goddess. I'm sorry but I can't stand people nerfing one dimension unreasonable like that.

Rather like how your bringing the two worlds together here.

Okay digging the direction. On to the next chapter!

Ok, cool story... would you mind if I suggest you something?

Nice chapter! I particularly liked the banter before they set sail. Everybody disrespecting Naruto is my jam.
Liked the plot for this chapter, too, though I wasn't quite sure what to think about that guy going on about magic - I'm not all that knowledgable about filler plots, so it's probably my own fault...

Anyway, nice work, and thanks for the chapter!

Good job you!

good work on this chapter looking forward to seeing what happens next :)

Awesome chapter.
By the way, if you decide to have Naruto's crew being wanted by the Marines, have you already come up with how much would their bounties be?

Wow. that was just. wow. I am officially hooked to this plot. it's a really interesting idea and that five man crew is pretty perfect. will you get them to learn haki. and will any of them have Haoshoku

It is a very interesting start. I'm wanting to know how you will continue.