Reviews for My Father's Child Series |
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![]() ![]() ![]() this is so good, can't wait for more |
![]() ![]() ![]() an interesting crossover... hope to read more soon :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love how tony's crazy in this chapter he's the best person there |
![]() ![]() ![]() wait a sec when did buffy find out about bruce/hulky |
![]() ![]() ![]() cute |
![]() ![]() ![]() great story :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() They didn't explain the Slayer part to Bruce and Co could you please write another one. Oh and one where Buffy finally notice how "awesome" she really is. And yeah her awesomeness cost her cloths and shoes but hey that's just a detail. 'lol' Oh by the way how protective will the Hulk be if someone tries to hurt his daughters. I wonder. I read this story on both sides several times and it's never boring. Love it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You need to do a chapter on Tony's reaction to the Slayer thing |
![]() ![]() It's hard doing a cold start crossover story but you managed with minimum explanation, your character seem right on for their series, their interactions are entertaining. A worthy read. Thanks for a good read, PeanutGallery59 Ps. You want a Great Read rating, you'll need two more chapters this quality which includes an action scene with much gratuitous violence and many snarky comments. |
![]() ![]() That was awesome! You should continue soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really liking it so far :) |