interesting so far. please update this :D

This was a good chapter u did great and I'm happy to see ash and may finally got together but the flip side now is that ashs injury is getting infected I can see may try to help find a cure and try to slow down the infection or try to find someone that knows how to treat injuries

You still working on this story?

I really like the sound of this. Hoping the two of them will spend some quality time together as well as come up with a plan to be safe. I thought the opening was too big of a paragraph I think it could split into three paragraphs other than that good job.

I'm liking this story so far your doing great and can you try to make the chapters longer it just feels a little short and I find it cute that may fell asleep on Ash's chest without even realizing it I wonder how they gonna react once they wake up keep those advance shipping moments coming I like to see these two end up as a couple at some point

Interesting to write a castaway story about Ash and May. I wonder how the story will go.

There are some things I'm curious about. Like do they have more Pokémon with them?
And I hope that you'll write some chapters that focus on their friends. How will they deal with the disappearance of Ash and May.

Anyway, update soon!

It's diffenitly something different and fresh from other stories I read it's interesting I know I want to see some advance shipping moments between ash and may hopefully someone will come and rescue ash and may off the island there stranded on and even though they are alone aside from pikachu being with them this is a good way for them to get closer together and help ther bond and friendship grow stronger looking forward to chapter 2 keep doing your best

It's pretty good so far, but I think you should spend some extra time on the grammar.

Not bad! I'd like to see this continue.