Reviews for Evil in the making
12yearold chapter 4 . 8/19
“His palace was made of ice he had made it himself.” Me: *flashback* sees(?)(not sure how to spell it) Elsa making her castle in frozen 1...*then listens to let it go*(mostly cause i got melancholy...)
krajewski693 chapter 17 . 8/9
Um father of Chaos
Dude chapter 17 . 6/12
Please update
Idil chapter 17 . 6/4
That was nice make a chapter where Percy kills that heavy black thing and absorbed it and became a man stronger than chaos
IWantABetterWebsite chapter 4 . 1/13
So far, this looks like an incredibly normal betrayal story, awful writing and all.
SuperSneakyWhale chapter 3 . 12/11/2019
Nothing against you but Pontus blessing means that he can manipulate almost every element as almost all elements have a liquid form
Anonymously96 chapter 1 . 12/1/2019
Looks like a normal betrayal fic like so many others from the first chapter tbh
Death Fury chapter 24 . 11/29/2019
good chapter please update soon
Guest chapter 8 . 11/25/2019
Really good
AstoriaPheonix chapter 3 . 11/26/2019
WHYYYYY WHY DO U MAKE PERCY OP AHHH

its good tho, nice story.
Bill Cipher3 chapter 15 . 10/28/2019
Does Chaos need an army around the world? Ask the 330 Million Hindu Gods to aid him, Lol.
Adrian chapter 11 . 10/4/2019
YOU FUCK
Adrian chapter 9 . 10/4/2019
SERIOUSLLLLLLLLLLLLLLYYYYYYYYYYY!
hjjh chapter 23 . 7/24/2019
dude keep making your storys me and my brother love them and love the cliffhanger
SonOfHades1 chapter 23 . 6/6/2019
Updateeee
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