| Reviews for This Time Around |
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   Sals86 chapter 21 . 4/20/2019 Great fic. Tooth achingly sweet with a smattering of angstsmut! |
| Mie779 chapter 21 . 4/3/2019 I really did enjoy this story... very romantic w just the right time of angst romance and passion... loved how they became a family in the end... would have loved to see that final epilogue hope you one day will write it... maybe the birth of their baby I would really like to read that. .. great work... will read more of your stories soon. |
| Mie779 chapter 18 . 4/3/2019 I do love this story... BUT now I really need to get something off my chest before I finish the last two chapters... I noticed some rather glaring mistakes in terms of spelling... and it is consistent so it can't just be a one time fluke... 1) there is a difference between message and massage... when you write about them ex touching each other they are "MASSAGUNG" one another... the other words is used when some on sends a message... so very different thing 2) wondering/wandering also two VERY different words... when his fingers are sliding over her body they WANDER... Wondering is when you THINK about something. .. I know you've had a beta on this but you treally need to use the correct words... I breaks the fluency of the read when you have to pause to think what is meant here... hope you take this as positive critic and nothing else... cause I DO like this fic... |
| resident-of-storybrooke chapter 21 . 10/19/2018 I've read this story a few times now, but god I can never keep it together at the end! It's such a wonderful story, so beautiful, so moving. I absolutely adore you and your writing! Thank you for this! |
| Invrwroteit chapter 21 . 12/1/2017 This was spectacular! |
| onceuponaprincess chapter 21 . 9/26/2017 This story is so sweet! Their little family is the cutest. |
| Doodlelolly0910 chapter 21 . 8/23/2017 This is so damn adorable. I loved every chapter. Waiting patiently for the second epilogue! |
| Nenski chapter 1 . 6/7/2017 Just discovered this story and I'm so intrigued! Can't wait to read the rest! |
| NotoriousCS chapter 8 . 4/22/2017 Sitting in my house a block from the ocean in Virginia Beach squeeing about their trip here! Loving the story! |
| Tony7323 chapter 21 . 4/4/2017 Fantastic I really enjoyed it this story well done ... Where's the other Epilogue ?... |
| Tony7323 chapter 20 . 4/4/2017 Very well written nicely done... |
| Tony7323 chapter 19 . 4/4/2017 Very good plot movement... |
| Tony7323 chapter 18 . 4/4/2017 Well done... |
| Tony7323 chapter 17 . 4/4/2017 Good job... |
| Tony7323 chapter 16 . 4/4/2017 This was fantastic well done... |
