| Reviews for Fate - Return from Nothingness, Struggle in a New World |
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   XXxxxadisxxxXX chapter 1 . 7/24 Bro what? How does this have so many followers and whatnot? This...it's a mess man. Everything jumps around like crazy and I can barely tell what's going on. That's without even mentioning the one line writing style and anything else that might be wrong. I see stories like this all the time that just outright befuddle me. It's a step above those that are written as a movie script instead of a story. |
| Guest chapter 2 . 7/4 FANFIC TRASH! TRASH! TRASH! TRASH! TRASH! |
| Guest chapter 3 . 7/4 FANFIC TRASH! TRASH! TRASH! TRASH! |
| Guest chapter 4 . 7/4 FANFIC TRASH! TRASH! TRASH! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/4 FUCKING USELESS! ASS HOLE! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/29 FaTe - rEtURN FroM NOThinGNeSs,STrUggLe iN a NeW wORld aka crappy story and should die a horrible death |
| Guest chapter 8 . 4/8 The start was intriguing but as the story prpgressed it starts feeling more and more like it's just an amalgamation of random ideas. The main offender of this is chapter 6. |
| Molotov987 chapter 20 . 1/5 I hate to say it man... Your fanfic here is pure trainwreck Its basically a garbage |
| GNINRUB chapter 4 . 10/13/2019 this fanfic is trash |
| shinobi117able chapter 1 . 6/24/2019 your story makes no sense man. I'm dropping this |
| Silly Thoughts chapter 3 . 6/4/2019 Well if he’s disliked by dragons guess this isn’t a fate route shirou. Curse resistance outside the fate route could mean heavens feel, slaying a dragon, fighting a curse, but no Illya should be alive in a good end of that, hmm guess he’s a bad end shirou of one of the paths. |
| sugoijack9 chapter 6 . 2/16/2019 Sorry but I'm also dropping this LDC Trial Edition You make it that the people in Re Zero are much stronger than those in Nasuverse. Its like you saying Dragon Ball Z is below the power level next to Konosuba. Even this is a fanfic this is an outrageous notion of you downgrading the power level of the Nasuverse. Seriously read the original series and compared it how vastly of a power of type-moon than bullshit Re Zero of your usual isekai factors. I hate you for doing this. |
| thetyrant67 chapter 6 . 1/1/2019 I have to say that this chapter is indeed a good reason why people abandoned the story. Including Sephiroth and a bunch of other cliche elements just makes it seem as if you don't have any way to make the story interesting, besides throwing in random characters from other franchises. Just a simple, straight crossover would have worked out perfectly. You could have focused on character interactions, relationship dynamics, or plot divergence after Shirou was introduced. But this... is just horribly stitched together. This chapter simply abolished my hopes of it being a good story. |
| ALTER-BOT chapter 12 . 7/15/2018 alright i cant stand it. i fell like just read some random OC MC. its not shirou anymore. just name bearer |
| AmethystPone chapter 17 . 7/4/2018 Scorn is fucking OP. People die when they are killed, he refuse to die permanently. At least Shirou got the excuse that he never did Die-Die. |
