Ahsoka T. / blackfire / naruko / dark bloom

Personally, I would've used the G1 Starscream. A fine chapter! I shall sleep well with this update!

What happens next and when is the next chapter and will the ratting change?

Will erbus go to the mortal kombat universe? And if so can goro be a part of the tribe
I have a car idea
Goro
The gauntlet
Courage 100
Power 110
Wisdom 75
Speed 85
Element earth

love it.
please write more.
wow.
great work.

Nice ideas. Very nice. And have you considered my Kaiju Warbeast idea?

Also... What's gonna happen to Intress now that she's been banished from the OverWorld? Will she seek sanctuary in the UnderWorld?

How about Godzilla and the other Kaiju be the Warbeasts of Tom's tribe?

liking what i am seeing

have you heard gundams.
if yes please put them in this story.
google gundams.
scan 00 rider gundam.
if you don't wont to add them its ok.
love it.
please write more.
wow.
great work so far.

You did a good job here, but your punctuation and paragraph breaks could use a little work. I'd be willing to become your editor, if you like?

Okay, I've gotta see where this story goes! Please update soon, I feel that it shall be a good read!

love it.
I can't wait until this comes out.
wow.

why is he being attack is there a build up to this or is there a quick a to b situations happening fast?

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