Dark story and unfortunately often true.

I rarely comments. But this was beautifully composed and very deserving of one. I wish people would write more Tonys like this. Strong, smart, and proactive in standing up for himself. I look forward to an update.

This was brilliantly written... pay no attention to the people who post rude comments. Haters will hate!

This was amazing

I kept waiting for it to be better... since it's fairly clear that you have a very high opinion of how special your writing is.

But it just didn't.

OMG...this was Fantastic !

Now if Tony has a smart attorney he would sue each of them personally and expose what they did in the papers. NO one would ever trust them, and they would quickly find they had trouble finding anyone willing to even work for them. I can actually picture many of the NCIS agents transferring to different agencies and it probably would have helped if Morrow was still alive, because you can be sure that he wouldn't have let them get away that easily. The higher ups would have quickly cut their loses each of them would have been out of a job

Loved this story- so glad you finished it. Can't wait to read what you put out next! (Also still hoping to read more of 'Cell').

Brilliant I love it. Well written, good story!

I would like the show to discuss issues like this, make your characters more complex and the stories more intense. Law & Order: SVU is like this. Unfortunately the show is becoming more cliché every day ...

interesting ideas, I like that the end had some hope and a lot of reality

awesome
cant wait for more

Exceptionally powerful story. Love Tony's POV and his big brother attitude towards Bishop (which was a nice part of the show's canon). Would like to see a follow up to this just to see if Tony can help Ellie recover.

Wow after everything no real fall out except to Tony and Ellie.
Glad Tony has a job at FBI with Fornell. Not surprised Gibbs got off scottfree or almost.
I liked the realistic ending, I just could not see this as a happy ending

Still feels wrong saying nice/great chapter but it is and looking forward the next chapter