I love you

The story is good, but 'Bones' is just a shitty scientist San's.

Noice, actually. Great writing, interesting premise, it's going to be good.

Well, this is different. Pretty good for a first fiction. I did see a few typos here and there, but well written none the less. Also interesting theory on Octoling eyes, and I guess I'm not the only one who thought Octo valley was sort of a neutral zone. Keep doing what you are doing.

Ok damn I have tos at that I like Bones already but what does he look like. I keep picturing him as a black haired Inkling. But I really loved Red's response to what bones did to her googles.

Ok damn I loved the reactions between "little red" and "blue" as I'll call him. So the break down felt so... um human? Well you get my point. It felt natural about the way she was all confused yet crying. The outburst just adds to her character. I must say that I am more interested in her than "Blue" at the moment. So I guess that the next chapter he'll explain what's going on and his name? Granted I might have missed that. And Damn I think I'll have to get this a shootout down the road.

Damn that last line made me laugh. Still waiting till you get to the more "dark" elements like what is going on.

What a nice squid. Will to help this pour Octoling.

So she knows about the humans culture? I guess that makes sense.