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Interesting, carry on...

To doom marine: in case you didn’t notice it’s FANFICTION. Anything can happen, unfortunately your brain can not compensate that. Spend less time flossing your dick.

Please update it’s crazy not to have an ending for this story!
Hope you update.

Please do finish this story, for the first natsu x mavis fic I've read, it seems amazing , and there are many things that I wish I could see you do, and I want an end to this, no cliffhangers about fighting a god

I certainly hope there will be an aftermath chapter where everyone has kids. Especially Natsu and Mavis. I have yet to see a single fanfic with them having a child. :P
But then again, the only Natsu x Mavis fanfics I've read so far are yours. "Explore the World With You," I think it was called? And this, "Immortal Love." So excited! So excited! :D

UPPPUDDDAAAAYTTTTTEEEEE

Please Continue!

Dude, they are both immortal.. They can be immortal loves together instead of becoming mortal .-.

Mavis is supposed to be smarter than that..

this is a great story, a role reversal and a pairing like this is great continue to update

Love it, the changes you made are appropriate and interesting, can't wait to see what'll happen when natsu wakes up

This was a great chapter.
Natsu show why he is still the most powerful wizard and the Creator of Etherious.

Very interesting way to put END power and his book fuctions.

Guess that Natsu still love Mavis to much to hate her and Zeref will face the mighty God of life and death.
Until the next chapter.

Neat

So August shouldn't exist, due to the circumstances portrayed.