| Reviews for The Warrior of the Light |
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   Scissors Dolphin chapter 3 . 7/20 Yeah no. Even if I were to believe your statement about your life, don't try to put your life into your story. Not to mention, what you described was just out right silly. We know that bad things happen in real life, but that does not excuse putting in eyerolling rapist kidnappers in a Dragonball story. It's kind of like this situation with Lime just deciding to leave Gohan. It's ridiculously fake, and bad storytelling. |
| Scissors Dolphin chapter 2 . 7/20 Eyeroll, chapter 2 and there is already a random rapist kidnapper. This is dragonball. Make more decent villains. |
| gabelou1991 chapter 1 . 7/29/2019 J'aime ton idée mais il sera avec les 3 mais cela veut dire que cela sera suite. |
| Naite-Laef chapter 10 . 1/24/2019 love it! |
| Guest chapter 4 . 11/9/2018 Ok u need to clarify how old they are right now. I'm assuming it's only been about a year so Gohan should be 11 or 12 depending on what age u used for the cell games. So why is 12 year old videl driving a jet car, why is erasa checking out an 18 year old trunks, sharpener is cussing up a storm? Seriously ur characters are acting like they're already in their late teens. And Gohan is just weird thinking erasa is the most beautiful girl he's ever seen is out of character for an oblivious kid like Gohan and calling the tournament a tournament of weaklings, Gohan being so judging and looking down on people for their strength is weird. Gohan isnt egotistical like that. Any way I'm more concerned with what their ages are and portraying them properly for their age |
| Chosen To Die chapter 10 . 11/5/2018 Awesome job on this chapter. I'm excited to see where this story goes. Thanks for the update! :) |
| thehappy chapter 10 . 11/4/2018 Great chapter! Looking forward to more! Hope sharpner gets put in his place eventually |
| RKF22 chapter 10 . 11/2/2018 GREAT WORK CANT WIT FOR MORE |
| Aaron Leach chapter 10 . 11/1/2018 Awesome chapter. |
| JulesSOD27 chapter 9 . 8/15/2018 Can’t wait for the next chapter to come out |
| Kur0Senpai chapter 9 . 7/4/2018 Still love this great story keep it going please it is awesome |
| shugokage chapter 9 . 7/4/2018 Nice job on this very interesting story! |
| victor0606 chapter 9 . 7/4/2018 Good chapter. |
| Aaron Leach chapter 9 . 7/4/2018 Awesome chapter. |
| RKF22 chapter 8 . 7/3/2018 excellent work cant wait fore more |
