I loved that. There aren't nearly enough good fics featuring Coran, and you used him brilliantly in this. I really liked how Rayzor came to understand just what they were fighting for, and I loved every bit of Coran knowing exactly how unpleasant it was going to be for both of them and doing it anyway. I'd have loved to have seen the looks on the other Paladins' faces when they realised just what happened. Great job with this, thank you for writing it.

THIS IS GREAT! Man I love this one.

Yay! Their first big ally! I was hoping that would happen!

Amazing as usual: ) can't wait to reed more stories: )

Oh my goodness, all aboard the feels train!
Thank you SO MUCH for writing a fic centering more around Coran! He is almost always left out of everything or is reduced to the quirky uncle, but you added so much more depth to him that's only really been hinted at in the actual series. Kudos to you!
And I must say, your original character Rayzor is very interesting and thought out as well! It would be so cool to see him reappear again!

I really like how you showed each side's perspective. Both Rayzor and Coran have personally experienced terrible things the Galra Empire has done to them. Coran really does care for the paladins. :)

I can't believe how many stories there are in the series! You are just cranking them out and they're amazing! I actually like that you write them out first and post all the chapters at once. I think I sometimes prefer that instead of maybe daily or weekly updates. Happy writing!

Nice story. I really liked this one.

Nice job. I like it.

Coran was awesome! I also really like Rayzor, and I'd love to see more of him! This was really well-written, I enjoyed reading it a lot :) Also, your creativity with the crystal was amazing! I have one little thing to say though: when you were describing both the process with the crystal and the nightmares they exchanged, you didn't write what they were feeling themselves. Like I didn't know what Coran was feeling about Rayzor's nightmare until after he woke up, and it's not very clear even then. Still, amazing story! I loved it! (And sorry for the long paragraph!)