Dun dun dun now the secret is out wolverine has a brother named Victor and it may be the Victor Mia messed with some months back. Loved the story hope you finish it.

Wow, I really hope that you continue this story, it's awesome!

Erik now you know Victor is dangerous, he's a mutant.
You have to protect Mia, now with her pregnancy status is unprotected.
Talk to Logan, explain what Victor is really like.
You will understand that Victor is an obsessive. Since he could not make Mia his own, he probably will not give up and look for her.

Great story so far.

I love it

Ouch, never saw this coming. This Victor?
And what about men in that mansion? They are all charmed by Mia? And why was she flirting with Hank?

That was a distressing chapter. I don't know whom I should feel sorry for, Erik or Mia. But thst end was quite relieving and promising. Waiting eagerly to see the fight between the two strong mutants for the innocent one.

Well I'm hooked. Feel free to update asap lol
Such a great cliff hanger right now I'm dying.

You have changed the story title?!
I was just watching x men apocalypse and thinking about Mia. So, Victor is not a bad guy? Nor a mutant? Good to know she's not suffering from this too. She's a very poor girl. I feel extremely sorry for her.
That broke my heart. Is it rude to say you are a very evil writer to do this to that poor girl? You better update sooner, please.
Thanks for the update, a great chapter.

Now she's not less cruel than him by ruining the flowers like this. But he deserves it anyway. I think she can even offer him money for sharing the house with him.
But eventually, after that night, I loved him more and I loved it when he was jealous too. But why didn't any of them thought about the consequences of not using protection?
A shocking end though. After that night I thought he had feelings for Mia. Now I'm really disappointed, was it only sex for him? He's definitely a dumb as she said.
Waiting for next update to see if this asshole will fix this.

Mia is really a poor girl to fall for him. She needed someone nicer. She's so frank and felt so sorry for her when she talked about him visiting her at the market and them walking together. And now her plans for the night are completely ruined!
Is she out of her mind? Does she really believe she can love someone else? She must kerp that Tyshka out of her life.

Thank you for the generous update. 3 chapters in one day? I never dare to dream of this.
Erik could be a real bad guy when he wants. But I'm glad he fixed it soon. I know he's a good man after all, with miserable childhood.
One thing, he shouldn't have had his helmet when he came back from his attack on the president. He's left it behind.
How comes she never cared about his wound even after he made it up for her?
Now after your intentions are revile, that's an important era of Erik's life that needed a focus in my opinion , so thank you.
I'll try to read the other two chapters tonight in bed before I sleep, or tomorrow morning.

i love it please update soon

Wow. I love your OC. I hope you go on. I'm curious to know what will happen next.

That was an intense start. A good one. Go on, please.