| Reviews for saving my father |
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   andjelija.nenic chapter 8 . 10/26/2016 Update more chapters about this story,because it's the best,extra and the great story that I was reading about it,and I am also starting to love and to like reading to this story. So can you please write more chapters,because I want to know what happens in the next chapters about it. THANKS SO MUCH FOR WRITTEN TO THIS STORY,thanks so much about it.&&&£££%%%$$$ |
| andjelija.nenic chapter 7 . 10/17/2016 Update more chapters about this story,because it's the best,extra and the great story that I was reading about it,and I am also starting to love and to like reading to this story. So can you please write more chapters,because I want to know what happens in the next chapters about it. THANKS SO MUCH FOR WRITTEN TO THIS STORY,thanks so much about it.&&&£££%%%$$$ |
| kasey123 chapter 6 . 10/10/2016 I love the story very much I want more soon I hope there's going to be more you're a good writer |
| andjelija.nenic chapter 6 . 10/10/2016 Update more chapters about this story,because it's the best,extra and the great story that I was reading about it,and I am also starting to love and to like reading to this story. So can you please write more chapters,because I want to know what happens in the next chapters about it. THANKS SO MUCH FOR WRITTEN TO THIS STORY,thanks so much about it.&&&£££%%%$$$ |
| Guest chapter 5 . 10/4/2016 The idea is interesting but your English is terrible. Try to get a Beta reader and do corrections before you post. And then there is cliffhanger ... And then there is unfinished sentence. You are the latter. Leave a cliffhanger but do not end a story with unfinished sentence. |
| andjelija.nenic chapter 5 . 10/4/2016 Update more chapters about this story,because it's the best,extra and the great story that I was reading about it,and I am also starting to love and to like reading to this story. So can you please write more chapters,because I want to know what happens in the next chapters about it. THANKS SO MUCH FOR WRITTEN TO THIS STORY,thanks so much about it.&&&£££%%%$$$ |
| andjelija.nenic chapter 2 . 10/3/2016 Update more chapters about this story,because it's the best,extra and the great story that I was reading about it,and I am also starting to love and to like reading to this story. So can you please write more chapters,because I want to know what happens in the next chapters about it. THANKS SO MUCH FOR WRITTEN TO THIS STORY,thanks so much about it.&&&£££%%%$$$ |
| kasey123 chapter 4 . 10/3/2016 Need more |
| EDJennie chapter 4 . 10/2/2016 I' m confussed here. One of your favorist autors is brilliantbrunette494, but this is actually a copy of his (hers¿?) stories... so... is this an addopted one. Or it is a copy. I really don't get it. They're even the same lines... (the story is Chris Halliwell BTW) |
| Guest chapter 3 . 9/29/2016 Hope there be more |
| kasey123 chapter 1 . 9/24/2016 I hope there's more |
