Reviews for Monster of Ember Island
Exodia98 chapter 5 . 8/5
Can Naruto have Joo Dee, from Ba Sing Se, as a maid? If Naruto helps with the takeover of Ba Sing Se, he finds out about the brainwashed "Joo Dee's". Which as the kind person he is will want to help these ladies. By using Kuruma to help unbrainwash them, the ladies can be free. But the first Joo Dee, after being cured, would want to repay Naruto's kindness by being his personal servant. I can see situations where Naruto would order Joo Dee to do something, and she would misinterpret his orders causing very embarrassing situations to occur. Especially, if the other girls were to join the fray.
Biblio388 chapter 5 . 7/29
Really fun story. I have enjoyed the chapters you currently have out for it, so I look forward to more in the future.
WeeDevil chapter 5 . 7/16
Loving this so far
JauneArc354 chapter 5 . 7/14
This is a really good for fanfiction and I can't wait for you to update more oh and is the egg a dragon egg.
StrikerTheFallen chapter 5 . 6/29
this needs and update! along with your other fics lol loved this naruto air bender cross over!
A Simple Library chapter 5 . 6/23
I sort of like the slow build up to the relationships! Though I would like seeing more of Toph, probably because I'm sort of biased to her.
A Simple Library chapter 3 . 6/23
Toph is so cute!
Musicscarecrow chapter 5 . 6/13
God I enjoy this story. Keep up the great work! Can’t wait for a new chapter
loquendo 2005 chapter 5 . 6/9
actualiza porfaa, me encanta tu historia
loquendo 2005 chapter 3 . 6/9
perfecta historia
loquendo 2005 chapter 1 . 6/9
buen comienzo
edeath756 chapter 5 . 6/7
update
Guest2 chapter 5 . 5/16
Please please please update
Hakeemj chapter 5 . 5/15
Nice story hope u update soon
Gabriel Pereira chapter 5 . 4/29
Sabes , no puedo ni describir como has desarrollado tu historia porque es sublime y espero subas un nuevo capítulo pronto pues tu historia tiene mucho potencial y me encantaría ver su final.
Y bueno no tengo nada que decirte pues hasta donde lo llevas como dije es sublime y no necesitas correcciones.
Espero logres sacar un nuevo capítulo lo esperare con ansias , pues eres mi 2do autor de fics favorit .
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