i like what's inside her. Taken out of context makes it way to easy to mess with hiccup.

A good story and I'm glad you avoided the standard 'everyone wants to kill the beast' plot line.

I do think that this story would be even better with some proof-reading. There were a lot of places where the wrong word tense was used and that tends to break up the story and sometimes made things a little confusing.

Thanks for writing.

That was an amazing story! Honestly I hope you do something of a sequel.

Brilliant write! I loved this so much I couldn't stop reading it and now will undoubtedly be suffering from lack of sleep since I have to get up in less then 4 hours but it was totally worth it!

I thoroughly enjoyed this story. I'm not promising to read your other stories but I will check them out.

I liked the Beauty and the Beast twist. Very well adapted and true to character. You have a wonderful imagination.

I will say a lot of the story had some poor grammar and confusing tenses. The flow would have been much improved if it read just a bit more clearly.

All in all, well done and thank you for posting.

I found it better than the Disney version. I absolutely loved it!

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This was a very nice story! Sorry for not reviewing earlier, I just haven't really been. Into fanfiction recently. But this was a really nice chapter!

Well, this was a really nice story, it was a great job, and I like the romantic part and the little action,
Thanks.

this was a nice chapter, thanks.

wow, so now toothless is going to be a dad. LOL

I like the slow bonded between hiccup and Astrid that is good, and fun par of reading this story to day is that I watch the new movie B&TB yesterday. so read this now is great.

The story is good, so far, I think that is so nice see this two in a different way.

jaja. well this was a nice beginning, so good job in the story, adaptation.

An amazing, twisted, beautiful tale! You should be proud of yourself because this was a fantastic read!

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