I really love what your doing here! Don't listen to those stupid and arrogant haters! Continue this story it's awesome!

I would of not believe anyone if they said someone could ruin two anime series this badly but here we are

I hate how you down play the dragon ball universe apparently someone that can go against a ssgss goku or ssgss vegita and hold there own for a decent amount of time and then write that he's evenly matched with natsu (I can get that if he didn't get all his ki back when he went to there dimension) and then Erza apparently can almost defeat him like how Weak are you going to make the dragon ball universe even in have form if a character can hold there own against goku or vegita that are ssgss there's know way anyone in the fairy tail Series could match that character like try and explain that cuz I'm pissed that you're making the dragon ball universe some fucking weak in this story like shit so you're going to say that makarov can go against goku or vegita that are going ssgss that's what you're basically saying and its pissing me off

Ren x Juvia is an good pairing

The first chapter was quite trashy... Super Kamehameha, Bigbang Attack, Big Bang Kamehameha, time x100 BigBang Kamehameha, Final Flash... no one in the Fairy Tail verse coul have survived that! Even a normal Kamehameha is dangerousfor them... you just messed everything with those attacks and the included super saiyan against Erza.
You should have said something about the big nerf to the dragonball verse at the beginning.

I really liked the new chapter, the update of what happening in Toki Toki City since Ren left and the idea, also thoughts of Trunks and Supreme Kai of Time was brilliant. I liked the insight in how Ren's training of Erza, Natsu, Gray and Lucy is going well also the reaction to the Phantom wreaking the guild. The scene with Ren and Erza, with the stolen cake and the Saiyan's punishment for her was funny, also her reaction was cute and I did feel for her but she did steal his cake. I really liked the Lucy/ren moments and hints of flirting and that. I hope he gets paired with her. Lucy's blushing and reactions are adorable.

I like the scenes with ren and the other about sleeping anywhere, the introductions and descriptions of the six time Patrollers and their personalities also my oc was so amazing and brilliant. The scenes at Lucy's apartment and the introduction to Freiza. the Scene with Levi and her team getting hurt by the Phantom was powerful and heart wrenching. The introduction and the battle with Juvia and Freiza was amazing too. I like the Shenron scene and the patrollers leaving scene I can't wait to see hw they arrive and how it unfolds in the next chapter.

Love this story happy to see it again after soooo long

... it took Trunks a full week to figure out he could use the dragon balls to bring him back...? Really? I mean, I distinctly remember Trunks to be inept at accomplishing anything in xenoverse 1, and 2, but... really? I shudder to think of how long it took for him to think to use the balls to bring Ren here to begin with.

¡Yeah!. You still alive.

Yay another chapter! Excited to see where this goes

Please do more chapters

Makarov said erza went with them and she wasn't mentioned once after that

Couple things, first Ren can go Super Saiyan 4...being in stage 1 shouldn't even come close to being a drain on his energy. Second Xenoverse clothes have stats cuz it's a game not a story... That might have come out harsh but still...

interesting