Reviews for Cursed Child |
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![]() ![]() Please continue this story! PLEASE!1 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well fuck you too teuchi, although concerning the sacrs im in two boats here, lol on one habd if naruto has them then the other hosts and their bijus could feel like kyubi is weaker than one of them, on the other hand though, they could see that he survived the treatment from the cause of the scars lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is an interesting story but I am not a fan of the Naruto and Sakura pairing and it seems like that is the way this is going |
![]() ![]() ![]() Does this make them all pedophiles since Naruto did his orioke henge being a child and not even a teenager |
![]() ![]() ![]() Schön wie Kurenai geholfen hat Sakura zu verändern. Es war echt enttäuschend das Kakashi sich nicht um Sakura gekümmert hatte. Das war echt ein Armutszeugnis! Besonders süß fand ich das wo die Drei mit ihren Hitai Ate denn alten Kakashi nachgemacht hatten. Das konnte ich mir richtig gut vorstellen! Wie hast du es hier vor mit denn Beschwörungs Verträgen zu halten? Wird Naruto seiner Mutter folgen, Jiraiya Pfad einschlagen oder wird es was ganz anderes? Mach weiter so und schöne Grüße aus Deutschland Google translation Nice as Kurenai helped to change Sakura. It was really disappointing that Kakashi didn't care about Sakura. That was really a poor report! I found it particularly cute where the three of them had copied their old Kakashi with their Hitai Ate. I could really imagine that! How are you going to keep up with summoning contracts here? Will Naruto follow his mother, take Jiraiya's path, or will it be something else entirely? Keep it up and greetings from Germany |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice chapter. Your writing could still use some work. You still flow one sentence into another for whole paragraphs with commas. It makes things a little confusing. Still keep up the good work |
![]() ![]() ![]() I LOVE THIS |
![]() ![]() ![]() Must have more asap. Love it so far, keep it up. Can't wait to see what happens next. Tenten finally gets a partner lol. Wonder how that would go and definitely a bonding of sorts that leads the way to love lol. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi I really love it so pretty please updated and take your time. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wonderful update thank you |
![]() ![]() I'm starting to like the story already and I can't wait for the next chapter also can u please continue your other story called the loneliness of the fox. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi please continue writing the stories cause I love it and it awesome so please continue the stories. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love this! Keep going! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent update |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice |