Reviews for Dragon King: Revamp
Consultant chapter 1 . 9/9
How do I apply to be a beta? This story has potential
Xyzdragon1234 chapter 1 . 9/9
Ok I'll admit it's better than the original, but I still liked th original why do you change the stories and more importantly why'd you change the story for born of twilight I still like the Zen story and I like the Zen x Wendy ship. Also I think for Drake's Dragon force it should be that his hair changes from golden blonde to pure white, and golden scales all over his body. he should also have four dragon wings because I read that the most powerful dragons have four wings and are also faster. and he should have a tail that also looks like acnologia's tail except golden. four dragon horns 2 coming from atop his head and the other two coming out of the sides of his temple on his head. also some dragon spikes running down his back. that's my idea for Drake's Dragon Force
jr1550434 chapter 1 . 9/9
I can’t wait for what you have in plan for this story
Xyzdragon1234 chapter 15 . 9/6
dude keep up the Draex story don't change it
dustinpuffer chapter 2 . 6/3
There was a bit of a problem with the pacing and the logic of a scene ?

Basically someone kidnap you then ask some question that was really in relevant to you, I doubt that I will have the mental facilities to process it. Even if ai do I wouldn’t have answer at all.

Before that thought, why would the mother suddenly have that thought? Foreshadowing?

Some problems with word usage, you use “soon” a lot, I didn’t really count but it was a lot.

Really cool idea, I am interested to see where this story going with everything. Given the age gap you will most likely leave him out of Tenrou Island I assume?
JUSTSOMEP3RSON chapter 1 . 5/31
I just realized that there was an update minutes after I asked XD
JUSTSOMEP3RSON chapter 15 . 5/31
Here too! Looking forward to it!
JUSTSOMEP3RSON chapter 14 . 5/31
Update please?
Joe chapter 14 . 9/28/2019
I love this story will you ever continue it or is it abandonded
JustAnotherStarkFan chapter 14 . 10/25/2017
love it!
Savitar3134 chapter 2 . 7/3/2017
Are you serious u make two new character do you know how hard it is to imagine two new characters huh why didnt u make the dragon natsu why u made this book a pain in my ass
bloodredmoon22 chapter 4 . 5/3/2017
How does a dragon teach sword play
DOCTOR DRAGNEEL chapter 14 . 3/8/2017
when will the next chapter be uploaded
engkeat.goh chapter 14 . 1/27/2017
Skip sex scene and made character introduction more simple.
Better no more girl for harem unless she is not OC.
By the way, why no one think that had 4 girlfriends is crazy?
engkeat.goh chapter 10 . 1/26/2017
I want to know why made two OC for harem.
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