| Reviews for To Do What You've Never Done - Part 1 |
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  Guest chapter 1 . 1/4/2019 I WANT PART 2. NOW |
 Fihi chapter 22 . 12/26/2018 This story has left me so scared and frustrated! Poor Raphael! Why hadn't he said anything to his family sooner before it got out of hand? Why is he like this? Don't answer. I know it's because he's Raph. :P But seriously, this "demon" that's possesing his head is scary. And how much in control he can be is scary too. I have a hunch it's the rat king but if it is him I have no idea how he's doing it. I really like how you write the charcters and scenes in general. Keep up the great work! |
| Guest chapter 21 . 7/1/2018 You balanced It pretty nicely,Got characters right,did not have any grammar mistakes-lad, You good at this!also,very fair amount of pain,not too much not too ,would add more concerns anyway but still,fluff ain't that important-very nice piece,very nice |
| Guest chapter 19 . 12/20/2017 DONNIE IS DEAD?! |
| Juanita27 chapter 18 . 11/13/2017 :O Oh my gosh here it comes! Raph's rage! |
| grungekitty chapter 18 . 11/10/2017 and it only took to chapter 18! Ok sorry, just some lighthearted ribbing at the slow burn. Very interesting. Can not wait for what happens next. I'm trying to keep myself from looking for the original so I can read it all at once and stay patient with your re-write. |
| LittleOldWriter12 chapter 18 . 11/10/2017 Damn cliffhangers! Please update soon! |
| Guest chapter 17 . 9/30/2017 Omg looking forward to the middle bros interaction. D seems really concerned about Raph and he just wants do help Raph is having dark thoughts and i see how it can be really hard to confront them to himself and even harder to talk to his family about it |
| LittleOldWriter12 chapter 17 . 9/29/2017 Wow... that was... intense! I love it! You are such a good writer, like seriously, how do you do it? Update sooon! |
| grungekitty chapter 17 . 9/28/2017 I'm still here. I just lack anything productive to say. |
| grungekitty chapter 16 . 9/26/2017 Was that f#cking foreshadowing? Glad to see that the plot is picking up. Excited to see where this is all heading. |
| LittleOldWriter12 chapter 16 . 9/25/2017 Yes! April to the rescue! I love their little relationship, they are fairly similar |
| LittleOldWriter12 chapter 15 . 9/25/2017 Wow... this story is getting intense! I love it! I'm curious about Raph... I wonder why he's got these thoughts in his head. Well, I guess I'll have to wait to find out! Please update soon! |
| dragonslayer111 chapter 13 . 8/2/2017 this will be interesting PLEASE UPDATE SOON |
| grungekitty chapter 13 . 8/1/2017 But... the dodomeki punishes thieves? Why would she go after the turtles? If anything she'd be stealing Saki's money/soul (pick your interpretation) Unless this is a mutant that just happens to look like a dodomeki? |
